All Comments on 'Our Fortieth Anniversary'

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logicalchaoslogicalchaos2 months ago

Just beautiful. Very lovely story.

Tarloso2Tarloso22 months ago

Proper love..proper emotion...loved it

XluckyleeXluckylee2 months ago

5 stars from Xluckylee for this wonderful, sad story. Thank you

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

A truer depiction of love could not be written.

andyinozandyinoz2 months ago

Great work Lee

MorovarMorovar2 months ago

This is what a marriage to true loving wife should be but often isn't. I wish I could give more than 5 srars.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Beautiful story but too close to home for me and what's ahead.

SomeOneTwoThreeSomeOneTwoThreeabout 2 months ago

Powerful.

And such a well done short story.

I hope the 750-words writers see this one.

This is as good as it gets.

Top ratings from me.

UnassignedUnassignedabout 2 months ago

Outstanding. It reminds me very much of Slirpuff's "Ira's Bride" - I really can't understand how anyone could not score this (or Slirpuff's) story less than 5/5. I feel sorry for them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Wow... a tearjerker. I cried at this. That's why I'm posting ANON. Anyone who complains about this story needs a fire ant infestation in their crotch.

Just_GymJust_Gymabout 2 months ago

Beautiful, but so sad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Wow, absolutely beautiful story.

HighBrowHighBrowabout 2 months ago

Life is a vale of tears. At least, they had each other at the end. She was a good wife.

BoringOldGuyBoringOldGuyabout 2 months ago

Wow, what a beautiful but sad story. Damn, my eyes are leaking

114FSO114FSOabout 2 months ago

True LOVE, ACCEPTANCE, and COMITTMENT on Both their parts. Something UNHEARD of and UNSEEN in modern Entitlement and Disposable society today. Great Story. 😢

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

That is a (loving wife) and a loving husband. This story is a rose amongst trash

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanabout 2 months ago

sad but shows true love

theVikingSailortheVikingSailorabout 2 months ago

Anonymous from a few hours ago got it right: the story is a rose. . .

DormayVooDormayVooabout 2 months ago

So beautiful and sad. I’m still crying.

NorreypNorreypabout 2 months ago

Wonderful love story. Tears in my eyes and lump in my throat

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

It isn’t fair, it never is for those who we love the most.

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dawg997dawg997about 2 months ago

The reason why this story is so difficult to read is that real life is like this sometimes.

Great short story.

Mrhappy4aaMrhappy4aaabout 2 months ago

Now this is what I call a "Loving Wife" story . So beautiful, so real life like, and so sad... It reminds me of the time my girlfriend was in the hospital again. She was dying of cirrhosis of the liver, the rest of her organs were not working. She's been in and out of hospitals for 8 months. Finally, they pulled her off the machines. I saw her that Monday and we talked about our life together. Told her I'll stop by Tuesday but she was gone that afternoon. She was only 43 yo. and there isn't a day that goes by that I don't think of her. That was almost 18 months ago. That's why this story is one of my favorites. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

God damnit, the feels.

It's cheating when you bring in death. But I'll allow it. You wrote it well.

26thNC26thNCabout 1 month ago

No words. That was just wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 month ago

WOW and Thank You!

EhsheehsheEhsheehshe25 days ago

Love the story I could feel the love in it

SaltySurpriseSaltySurprise20 days ago

It brought tears to my eyes

WhoGivesAShitWhoGivesAShit18 days ago

Well written, and touching. It’s RL for far too many. It’s also really damned sad.

AnonymousAnonymous13 days ago

5 stars from GW on a great story . I hope that your others are half as well written as this one

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman10 days ago

Beautiful, sad, and true love.

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I am a 60 year old man that has been forcibly retired due to a stroke. to keep myself sane, I have been writing erotica and other short stories.