All Comments on 'Our Friend Jack'

I hope there will be more soon? I just love bisexual stories and this one is off to a great start!

A wife who loves watching men suck and play with each other?

What could be more fun than having a wonderful foursome bi fuckfest?

Like, nothing!I

Please keep writing this sexy story!

Great story, no wasted time or words. The erotic build-up and inter-play between the two dudes, and honest voicing of desire for each other's spouse was hot hot hot. Great ability to put erotic arousal and desire into words. Curiously even the homosexual fantasizing was inspiring. 5 boners for this story and look forward to more.

Wives, hot tubs, subversive erections, even more subversive ejaculations. Marvelous.

'...everyone has a "Jack" in their life.' Good thing all those Jack guys don't get together at the same time ....

love stories about bi couples getting together. look forward to reading your next chapter.

Great story that leaves you wanting for more! Looking forward to chapter 2

Looking forward to reading part two. *5*

Oh this was Great, write more for us.

Love the idea of a hot tub seducing people into letting go of their inhibitions. Something about water that is intensely sexual. Knowing it was written as 2 parts it's fine they didn't actually do anything yet but I will say it has a bit too much angst for my taste. I mean, yes I was raised like that too and had those horrible old stereotypes in my head for years but his wife has proven herself cool several times. It doesn't make sense he would fear her reaction so much. That said, totally hot. My favorite fantasy to lose my Bi-blowjob cherry is either a gym shower or hot tub / pool situation, or maybe a beach or lake. Someplace where it's normal for guys to be naked together and things progress naturally to me sucking a hot cock. Oh, and thanks for not including all the unnecessary dom / sub crap so many stories have lately. Great sex is hot enough, no need for all the power trip bs thanks.

very well written, sharp dialogue...wish it was longer;more played out...very erotic

Wow ! Your writing is very good. Your description of his thoughts and the angst that it caused was palpable. Your characters came to life and reminded me of past fantasies. I love the dialogue and the give and take while husband and wife are having sex and fantasizing at the same time. Can’t wait for part-2. 5-🍆🍆🍆🍆🍆’s