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goldemeraldgoldemeraldalmost 3 years ago

A lot of people are going to stop reading as soon as they see the second-person perspective.

needaminxneedaminxalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for your feedback, it’s not my norm but just how this story formed between myself and a friend.

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Happily married and only here for online fun, interacting with beautiful people like you to add a little spark of excitement to life.