All Comments on 'Our Girl in Blue'

by GraceFairway

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obviousagentobviousagentabout 3 years ago

Fantastic work, your set up, descriptions and setting are great, Mel's fall into another life was perfectly paced and crafted. Please do more of these type of story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

more pleaese want to hear more about Jewel and her freands

MoosetalesMoosetalesabout 3 years ago

I liked this one a lot. I enjoy corruption stories and having one about a career cop getting transformed is always enjoyable! Hope to have more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I usually never read stories rated less than 4, the comments changed my mind as I loved it! I always wondered where cyber goths came from now I know. Live stories about rave culture as I’m an old raver. Why does this have less than 3 rating?

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I write things I like, and which appeal to me, and hopefully other readers will enjoy them too! My themes include (but are not limited to) mind control, smoking, alt girls, clothes/outfit swaps, prostitution and women dominating each other. I can be reached for feedback/requ...