All Comments on 'OUR Little Secret'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
more, more!!

This story is so, so HOT!! Please write more. I am eager to find out what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
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Love it! Can't wait for more

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh my damn

That was so hot.... cannot wait for more !!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
loved it edged three times

i had a special female friend read this to me, that make the story so intense. after almost Cumming three times. she stopped the torture and told me to let the cum fly. I said no I want to hear all of it, so she read as I jerked allowing me to blow an intense load of hot cum. I thanked her, but id really like to thank the author for a huge orgasm. having a story read to you is the best. D

aclassyladyaclassyladyover 8 years ago
HOTT

I am glad I chose this story to read, for it was hot!!! I can't wait to see where you go from here. I do hope you continue with this story. If read in the right situation, it will make you come and then get you hot all over again.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Awful!

Stupid dialogue, misused words here and there, for example: "coming off momentarily." Momentarily does NOT mean soon, it means for a brief period of elapsed time.

akSolitude1964akSolitude1964over 4 years ago
Lovely

I love everything you write... Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Such a lovely read..

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