All Comments on 'Our Move'

One trick pony. Every woman strips at a black club.

Love having a big black guy making my wife his whore and fucking her into submission in front of me. Hurting her to show me how he controls her and makes her cum.

Every story is the same

Aside from piss poor quality (grammerly anyone? Spell check? Sentences that aren't questions have question marks), this guy doesn't have anything to offer but black gang bangs. He needs his own category for crap.

More garbage. I could see sharing your wife. I cannot see sharing your wife to a bunch of guys at a club. That's VD central kids.

It's hard to imagine someone taking the time to actually write this...unless they're a redneck teenage boy who can't get women.

Don't quit your day job.

Dumb in every way, I feel bad I wasted my time

Loved the story hope there a part two

This wins the award for worst crap of the year. Good news though; you have plenty of time to stop foisting this crap on poor unsuspecting readers.

Wow. More hillbilly trash.

Man this is some fucked up shit. Why write this kinda story? Why not do something realistic and sexy?

Stop. Just Stop writing. It's painful to read this "author's" work. It's a broken record of a million black guys and one women. Who ever gave you that idea needs to give you another.

This is some fucked up shit.

Have you ever thought of writing a decent story. Something that's actually possible and, dare I say, erotic?

I don't think this is even a good fantasy. I wasted my time with it.

again why not describe the gangbang at the club??