All Comments on 'Our New Rules'

Well done, Katie. You are my newest guilty pleasure. Love you hard . Great story!

Well-written - well-PACED!!!! Impressive

So very hot!

Loved it, great story!

Wonderfully erotic mood. Great read. Thank You!

Wonderfully written. I want to know more about this relationship

Please

Decidedly different; definitely delicious. Great story, believable characters, and solid prose!

Intensely detailed and erotic. A lovely fantasy.

I would have liked to see some of the turmoil in Katie’s mind - is this the right time? Is this the right thing? How long has she been thinking about Mark as a partner and not just a professional mentor?

Great read! Him flipping the tables of control on her was great!

Check out this amazing story. It's a complete work of art.

Fricking fantastic. Consensual and exciting for both of them. I just wish we could see an evolving romantic relationship out of this in a followup, or to see their evolving feelings. Need not have more kink or trappings of 24/7 or slavery, although the kink might deepen a bit. She was the "dom" in a certain sense but submitted so well in the moment. Just lovely. Please, this could be a part 2 with a lovely prequel to how she got here and lovely sequels about their relationship!

Really great story, honest and believable characters. Loved it.

Good well written story. Excellent erotic flow. I would have have like to see more build up in the beginning and drawing it out at the end. But I like being teased by a dominant woman!

Beautiful story. The ending cries out for at least one more chapter, though. I'd love to read about their further adventures as their formerly platonic relationship takes a turn. Please continue this wonderful story! You are an excellent writer and I look forward to additional stories appearing here soon.

A great story, well prepared, paced perfectly but unfortunately marred by changes of tense and basic spelling errors, these problems make the reading far more difficult than it need be.

I certainly thing it worthy of some praise. I enjoy stories about spanking more when told from the female spankee's perspective. Thank you.

Are you sure this is a fantasy? It reads like a description of how to seduce a "girl" from her perspective, (see below) including the spanking. Proof Read and Edit. Chapter 2, that is up to you. If you are still writing. Two years old.

Enjoyed the slow teasing & erotic pleasures, well done!

Beautifully-paced and intensely erotic development, just begging to be continued.

Superbly arousing.