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by 69boiop

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Superb desi story

So believable, great story buildup. Please do continue.

69boiop69boiopover 4 years agoAuthor
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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
One of the Best

The story teased, and made up it's way through, very well. I loved the fact that there was a mix of everything in it. A little bit of Romance, love, and the ice breaking dates. A mix of all of that, along with the intimacy, was just, perfect ! Keep posting more !

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Heyy

Wow Nice one. Quite imagination you have. - The casino girl ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
This is art.

This is art. The line you draw between sensuous and sensual love, between your pages is amazing.

sriram7612sriram7612over 4 years ago
Perfect little story....

Loved it. Build up is great without any size reference of female. A gem!

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Hey stranger, hope you like my work. I am still a newbie, learning the ropes of erotic writing. Write to me at 69boiop@gmail.com on Gmail or hangouts. you can always contact me @raw_ero on Instagram. Still a long way to go. And uhhh. I like to drink water and breath. I hate d...