by WickedScribbler
It was good....maybe I think that just because storms are a turn on!
This was very very good. So well written and hot and erotic. I loved the description buildup and great sex between two people in love and lust. I defiantly looking forward to the next story you post. I hope you might take these two very likeable people a little farther. That was so hot and romantic.
Thank you very much
Is this really your first story? I'm impressed. I hope you continue because you are getting the right mix of character development, story, and sex. Looking forward to many more.
Really creative and hot writing, making me feel all hot and bothered...
I forgot how well this story came together. It's one definitely worth reading over and over again. It'll cause much rubbing ;)