All Comments on 'Our Private Little Cove Ch. 04'

by cincy4fun6

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redbaron172redbaron172over 3 years ago

Hummmm well that was certainly a twist...... witches and warlocks??? could be interesting...... can't wait for more....

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Either proof read or get an editor, so many mistakes that take away frrom the story

cincy4fun6cincy4fun6over 3 years agoAuthor
Twists..

They just happen I had no idea until chapter 4 where this was leading, 5 is also done and working on 6, working in a couple other of my fetishes in here too. esp the Voyeurism. Followers, please forgive any errors.

Smartest1Smartest18 months ago

Apart from the spelling mistakes, for which you gave warning, I am mainly curious the the girl's name: it started as Chloe, but further it became Chole, which I find a lot less. Tks anyway

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