All Comments on 'Our Private Little Cove'

There are at least three more chapters to cum!!

Perfect example of how a trigger can inspire an incestuous relationship.Mine was overhearing phone call of dad's impand mom being "so horny I could climbvthe walls. Mom noticing my hard on inspired her.

my neighbor who was one year older than me

Great start please keep going I am on the edge of my seat wondering what they are going to do from here on. Lots of possible scenarios like laying on the deck watching the stars and starting to fool around some more. They may fall in love and stay together to make babies.

Enjoyed.

You really need to learn to proof read, so many words added that don't need to be there, makes reading very annoying!!!

A nice story, mutilated by errors.

laying out IF a very skimpy swimsuit and work on her tan

wondered vs, wandered;

We came across A two couples that wAS skinny dipping

Pretty good, but you should get an editor. There were a lot of misspelled words.

Make More!

As I voted, I liked your story. A little bit rushed, and in need of editing, it's premise was believable. Another chapter would be welcomed.

That is a good start you should write more

The numerous grammar errors broke the flow of the story. Good concept. Keep writing.

Down towards the end the word sisters should read sister's.

"We came across a two couples that was (were) skinny dipping in the ocean", "You going to get naked or just start (stare) at me?"

Read through twice or three times word by word before publishing.

Looking forward to where you take this.

This had all the makings of a good story, but there were so many spelling errors, I just couldn't enjoy it. You should really read it over before publishing it.

You really need an editor.

Excellent little story -- good juicy one-pagers are always a great find. (You should do a close proofread and clean up the many typos, though.)

Good start, you really need someone to proofread for you!

Wrong words suggest you dictated this story and did not read what was typed.

This causes a break in the reading of your story.

Nice story so far. It would be criminal to stop now. :-)

You should have someone proof read your stories. So many mis-spelled words and wrong tenses made reading very poor.

I hope you continue this tale.

Innocent first time stories between siblings is always so beautiful. Please continue their journey together!

How do things go. Hope they continue exploring each other bodies.

Super keep it going.

What they said.

....our parents informed us that Dad had surprised Mom with 2 weeks on an Alaskan cruise for their 40th Aniversary. We would be left at home by ourselves the first week. The second week Dad's younger sister would be coming into town and was invited to stay the 2nd week at their home.

Keep the story going

A GREAT story as it shows how easily family can start being involved with each other and I do hope you'll continue with it . .

I must say though with how many other stories you've written I am surprised you didnt have an editor proof read this .

This was unbearable to read good overall story but the mistakes made my head hurt.

I know there are typos, I'm human and my mind works faster than my fingers sometimes. If you don't like that fact, oh well feel free to click on to the next story by someone else.. Someday when I get really bored and at a miss for something to do I might go back and edit them or pass them on to someone to edit. I'm not stopping the creative juices just to fix a stray Capital or an extra word, a misused word, or a missed comma that people can read around. ITs a free service, not like you are paying for it.

I have 2 chapters written, and a 4th that I sorta don't like totally. It seems very confusing to me and I wrote it so it will get some extra work.

Can’t stop now

You need to write more the one page. I find stories with two or more pages more enjoyable then just one page!

Really enjoying it to this point.

It nice to see siblings who are in love, not the usual: "Your dick is bigger than my boyfriend's...

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Lots of opportunities and possibilities here. Maybe stick to the zombies.

I'm interested! Keep writing!!

Is she on birth control, it would be great if she had his baby, write more

While reading your story i was wishing I had a sister. I hope to find more of your stories to read. Very hot.

I liked it but need someone to help proofread for some simple typos. Lots of possible plot lines from here. Are any in a relationship? Continuing while keeping parents unaware? Ages imply college in play so how does that work? Etc.

What I like about your story was the description of your sister , no measurements overblown . What needs improvement is your spelling . Great Effort !

Excellent Start!!!

Two misspelled words in the first two paragraphs! No need to go on. All you have to do is reread your own writing or get an editor.

Way too many mistakes. Too sloppy. No care was put into writing this piece.

Please get an editor ... Your imagination is excellent, but it needs a vehicle to get from your mind out through your fingertips unscathed ...

So many errors, it would be best to start another story line when ready.

Please write more on this story line.

Great!!!!!!!

Yes, please do get an editor.

You really need to proof read and stop using Spellcheck

Well done. Loved it

Hope this turns into a long term relationship with the parents being on board and learning they will be grandparents until it is revealed that the parents were brother and sister too.

I'm not an expert. I'd suggest a little more story line and some character development.

The story is fine, but you really need an editor. I know you have a hard time with comments, but you will get higher scores if someone fixes your typos and grammatical errors. Do what you do well-write. And let someone else clean things up for you.

Good story, but have someone edit it for you. It will improve the story.

Loved it. Please continue.

Kindly check your spelling. Is her name Cloe or Chloe? Coleh isn't it

Hello cincy4fun6,

I started to read your story and failed to write down the title a little over a year ago. With the help of other members I found the story and I love what you have written. If you have written additional chapters may I please have the link.

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