All Comments on 'Our Saturday Night Anal Ritual'

Well, you lost me and I quit your stupid story when you had the she-devil attack Blake out of nowhere for no reason. Just a poor story. Enjoy your two stars.

Love the sorority stories....

A fairly decent idea, but poorly executed. The sex is mechanical and devoid of either emotion or sensation. Nor is there enough dialogue.

Different as hell!

Fun story.

Bill S

complete trash not worth reading

Some of the critic about your writing is correct. You have an excellent idea and know well the intricacies of a turnip penis (or rocket popsicle), but in some parts you made sex too mechanical. The feelings were there but only hinted about, if you decide to rework this story do it with smaller installments. The idea and the way you worked it get you a 4* where I would want to give a 5...keep improving.