All Comments on 'Our Secret'

Good concept. Good work. Pls consider writing a ch 2

There's lots of massage stories in Literotica, so it's hard to write one that has something novel to add. This one did, with the masseuse not realising that the client was a known ex-boyfriend of her sister. I liked it.

Massage stories can be good, in that they provide lots of opportunity for slow development of erotic suspense and teasing. I thought that this story did reasonably well on this.

And overall, I thought that it was well written and very readable. Interestingly so, being written first-person male by a female author.

Lue

I just wish she had cleaned him off with her mouth! oh - you ARE going to write a story about them going to the beach, right?

Well written, moved along nicely. The ending fantastic! Keep up the good work.

so original, so special, Suzuki. You have such an erotic mind, and such a way with words, love the story!

I love tales about massages, and this one definitely worked for me. Very well written.

Thanks!

Ah, he finally gets to see his ex's tits huh. I then he gets to experience a nice tit fuck, well done! Nude beach is next I hope!

Love how the story and climax build, very hot!

A brilliant story, with a very happy ending!

I love the story! It's really well written, very arousing and left me wanting more. I would certainly be interested to read more about these two. Also, what a lucky guy!

The way you fill this Story wih a lot of details around the massage table again is great!

I guess you also made some experiences with massages and your imagination asked for what this might feel for a guy getting teased and relaxed!

Can't wait to read a new story!

I don't think you realise how difficult, if not impossible it would be for a man to lie face down flat on a massage table with a hard-on. Otherwise this is an excellent story, truly arousing and a delight to read.

Robertodavo;

Hey Suzuki... hot story, i am going to have to book a massage for today!

Any plans for a part 2?

What really knocks me out is a story that, when you're all done reading it, you wish the author that wrote it was a terrific friend of yours and you could call them up on the phone whenever you felt like it. That doesn't happen much, though. Blown away.

Loved it, more to come I hope?

Excellent story. Love your writing style. Please keep them coming.

Obviously we need more of their time together!! Very good left me wanting more much more!!.

Excellent!