All Comments on 'Our 'Special' Anniversary'

Good story; needs some refining. More stories where husband gets revenge and humiliates wife then possibly gets a divorce.

Great fantasy... maybe worth the heartache it took to get there.

Not a bad fantasy story but we also must wonder what the wife is doing when hubby is at work??

Liked it, as a fantasy.

Stupid story. Just get a divorce.

This was clearly set in a trailer park. Singlewides only.

sorry trash ,the best way to get even or payback is divorce

Both MC and wife Sherry are pretty awful people. Ken, too. Only Judy has any redeeming qualities, but those are offset by the ease with which she sleeps with a married man. That makes for a really weak story.

a - 10 stars! No real man would do that to a woman. He would divorce her but a REAL man WOULD NOT stoop to her level! This "story" is crap!

What a couple of nasty people. Regardless of things like diseases they need to rethink their ideas. He simply should have thrown her out and divorced her. None of this "what's good for the goose is good for the gander baloney. His wife is a cheating whore whom he can no longer trust. Let her go live with lover boy.

1 star - stupid story - neither one of them were too bright. There was no mention of condom use, so both of them could be infected with STD's.

Nice writing. Crap content.

Not worth rating.

None of this is new to Sherry. She did all of it the night she spent with Ken. Why do you think she agreed so quickly?

Not even sure why you felt the need to post this pile of trash.

Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaay too stupid to get beyond page one.

Good for the goose, good for the gander.

Ken gave Judy an STD, Sherry gave hubby an STD, Judy gave Ken’s STD to hubby and Sherry while Sherry gave Judy her STD. All three spent months on antibiotics before the divorce.

Hmmm, love the story and how it came about...brings back so many memories.....

The end of the story should have been where despite Ken's size, the story teller looks him right in the eyes and kicks him in the nuts. When Ken hits the ground, he stomps him a couple of times. Then, he leads his wife out of the club, and reclaims her by fucking the daylights out of her at home.

I don't think the story accurately portrays the pain and humiliation of what the wife did. There is no recovering from that. Reducing the story to nothing more than a chance for more extreme marital sex hardly erases the damage done by the wife. I can't see the relationship continuing once the wife comes home the next day.

The only reasonable choice is to divorce Sherry. She does not love or respect the MC. Judy will keep him entertained and satisfied until the divorce is final. If the MC has a fantasy of turning his shrew wife into a submissive slave, he doesn't need to be married to her in order to be her Master.

A slave must be with her/his Master. There is no free choice. Marry someone who chooses to be with you over their other available options.

Pretty damned stupid premise, with the typical over the top stupid wife.

Im guessing many writers really dont like women.

Story of a cuckold, a slut and a whore. Nice trio.

A story about two cheaters

Three sluts

Either she lost her mind or simply a disgusting human being . Either way, divorce is on the horizon.

Sorry I didn't get to finish this story. I fell asleep.

A story from a cuck for cucks trying to pretend he is Not a cuck

You don't really understand women anon.

Women DO hold grudges, against other women and nice guys.

Women always submit to the alpha, it's in their fucking DNA.

How many women secretly confessed to liking that 50 shades drivel? A lot.

How many women complain about their man not being "confident enough"? again, a lot.

he asserted the shit outta her. he blitzkrieg her. he has all the leverage. he doesn't care if he divorces her. she knows that, feels it even. women are very VERY good at reading people. she already gave herself away, she already confessed how sad and pathetically she wants to remain married. She gave up that leverage fast. Women also CARE what others think, far more than men. No one will give her sympathy points for running off with a former lover on their anniversary date night. it's a bad look. What's he guilty of? Trying very hard to win her back before she cheated. And then hooking up with some cutie as she abandoned him. He comes out looking daisy fresh.

Women are far more likely to share a man. They compete for attention of the best male possible. They're more than willing to compromise sharing a denzel washington or brad pit. Men don't share. They are hardwired to SEED many women. Oh, male friends share women all the time, but they don't consider those women. But men want to know that WOMAN 1 has ONLY my seed, so if i spend YEARS raising that child, I know it's mine. That's about it. Women never have to worry if the baby in her belly is really hers. It's just not something they'll ever understand. Men barely understand it, nor do women. Biology drives us hard, we're mostly backseat drivers.

I'm out.

That she's not out, fucking everything with a swinging dick, behind his back, then he's an idiot. Women hold grudges like no one else can, she will never let it go. She will humiliate him at every possible chance, even if he doesn't know about, because to her, that will be a victory. She will target his friends and coworkers for that added humiliation to him. Even if she has to degrade herself to do it, she will see it as a win.

stupid fairytale.lmao

1starr

Humiliating her was not worth the effort. Divorce her and be rid of her.

WTF?! The twat humiliates her husband on a special night out by dumping him and going to a hotel to fuck her old boyfriend?! Hasta la vista, cunt!

Whatever happened after the wife left bar in this story makes absolutely no sense. This is a complete drivel that has not an inch of credibility.

What amazes me is how many fools have given high grade to a gibberish like this.

I’d of changed the locks on all the doors as-well-as the overhead garage door code.

anon 1-31 anonymous critics are, by definition, pussies.

hiding assets and make damn sure you don't make a baby with either of them. Plan your moves and retire you, your money and NOT your wife to someplace out of reach of USA law. If Ken is married, fuck that up. Either way, fuck him up. He has time

That one just went too far off the deep end for me. That's all folks.

The wife realized the grass was not greener, and she had a temporary mind fart.

Home with hubby just got better and better once she realized, what she had. Good for all three.

two wrongs don`t make it right

two idiots that deserve each other

maybe both of the spouses could catch an std that would be nice !!!!

Never mind the ones you have are all the same. I expect the next one would be too.

Very erotic.

stupid story

1 starr

"cuck in a closet"

you she's still boinking her old boyfriend. Dump her. Keep the new girl. Fuck up her old boyfriend and live happily ever after you twit.

Or better yet kept his dick well clear of Sherri's rancid cunt. He risked catching something or worse taking care of the pussy hound's bastard in 9 months time.

... don't make a right. Divorce papers should be served asap.

After she says she is going with boyfriend, calmly grab her left wrist tightly and remove wedding and engagement rings in full view of entire bar while loudly telling everyone what she and loverboy are planning. Given years she has worn them painful twisting and pulling will be needed. Point will be driven home. If she still leaves then FUN TIME WITH JUDY!!!

a marriage is a commitment, a contract, a dream. Once broken, the commitment and contract are just a burnt piece of paper, and the dream is free to morph as it will.

Started to be a good story then it turned to hell in a heartbeat.No marriage here and no man card.

Kenny would be knee-capped in a bar parking lot one night at some future date...if only because of the smirk

But purely fantastical.

True story about serial cheating wife

Details on Facebook profile of dearbornmt@yahoo.com.

That info and more cost her position as college instructor in Helena Montana.

She has stated she will continue to have affair after affair as that is who she is.

I am fairly certain her contact info can be had on request from Facebook profile. She is known to be willing to travel to cheat especially if guy has money

Unfortunately, women don't do anything for nothing. Generally, to them having sex is nothing if they don't get something else besides that. Judy is gorgeous? So she goes for a jilted husband who's been just publically humiliated by his wife? Hardly.

Fucking Judy was just a prelude to having the piece-of-shit wife served with divorce papers!

Now it's fuck whomever he wants without having to worry about the used-up piece-of- shit he had been married to!

no real life man would keep her.

She humilated him, on their anniversary no less.

Nope she would be gone in a flash.

What started out as a good payback divorce type story toured into a stupid ass story that I could not read the whole ending.

to the male lead guy. He was a coward or he wasn't motivated where his wife was concerned. If he had of been the type who would have stood up for himself she probably wouldn't have gone off with the boy toy. If he had told her the consequences of her humiliation and cuckolding she might not have gone. But, his reaction to the "incident" showed us why she didn't have any respect for him. He saw the other guy was bigger and that threw him into passive/aggressive pussy mode. Too bad, so sad. 2 estrellas for this one.

I'm trying to think of at least one thing good to say about this story. Nope. I can't think of one.

I am sorry this story stinks! I know that it is fiction! But I still think that it stinks. Love you all! Bye. Greg. Oh 2stars = 20 % Bye. Oh shock and awe factor 10

I didn't realise LW was the fantasy site here. 2 **

Pure garbage.....

As if

Then I would have driven home without the soon-to-be ex-wife. I hate stories like this. Of course he's no better than her. I gave this 1 star. Too bad I can't go lower.

And hubby is sure she's never seen Ken again. Once they got into regular MFF, didn't Sherry want some more male spice? Those nasty tags again.

In your dreams.

To truly be even you need to have her humiliated in public... and yet you've removed ways that can be arranged already...

Maybe the best way would be a meal out with all of their parents... not only should Judy be invited but Sherry should have to explain their relationship and how it came to be due to her humiliating her husband and cheating...

Seems THAT ought to do the trick... she'd either divorce him (and good riddance to her) or she'd NEVER humiliate him again.

He still came out with the crappy end of the stick.

He was humiliated in front of everyone.

She wasn't.

to make 2 positives out of 1 negative. TK U MLJ LV NV

5* for the exhibition of so many errors a person can make in a single day. she hadn't seen him in years, said he was single, but come on, would you really believe the story he told. the humiliation she put her husband through in public, even if he was into watching other guys fuck his wife, to reveal it in public. picking up a woman he doesn't know and within 20 minutes was fucking her in his own bed, is it possible, maybe. maybe she witnessed the humiliation he was going through and gave him a mercy fuck to help him out. there may be women like that, who knows. last and first, is the possibility, that either one of the people could have a STD.

Seems to me that there is so much more potential for this tale and a lot of questions and issues that were only glancingly touched on. Yes we understand that there were problems at home ("...argued more and fucked less..." I think is how the author put it). Why? Was he working too much? Was she? No mention of kids, so were they a factor? Were they married the whole of the nineteen years she and Ken had lost contact with each other? Ken seemed to get her too easily. Why? She gave up the fight on his return home from dropping Judy off at her car that first night too quickly, and moreover seemed too eager a participant on their first group session. Since this started as a tit for tat scenario, what about involvement of another guy? Not to say that sort of thing does it for me, but keeping along the lines of the start of the story and her "outrage" at the retribution it seems that this was the opportunity for the author to delve further into the story and what lies beneath. Too many other points and specifics to get into in a forum, but suffice it to say that I felt unfulfilled reading this entry. This story was the tip of the iceberg...what about the other 90%?

He was a wimp to let himself be humiliated obviously,but at least he fought back a bit.

Even if he would have to put up with her lovers contempt.

and a reasonable accommodation. 5*

Sure he could have made a scene when his wife announced that she was leaving with the old lover, but all that would have accomplished was starting a fight and maybe getting him banned from a place he might want to go to again. What he chose to do paid his wife back for her single night of cheating many times over. And showed her and her old lover that they hadn't really taken anything from him that he valued enough to get all dejected over. In the real world where every man is not a former Navy SEAL or MOH holder, that's probably what real revenge looks like if you're lucky.

nuff said for the cuck author. must be an auto biography

I think is the first macho wimp I have ever know

I gave you 5 stars, simply because you did not follow through with the typical wimp story. The fact you wrote in the story that he gave every chance to his wife to stop and think of their marriage. The revenge part should have continued further. The story should have included her being asked to or rather... pushed out of the house for a few days... while both he and judy enjoyed themselves. I did not however enjoy the threesome, I would not expect sherry to accept it either. a chapter 2 would be nice... doubtful... but a re write, he was never a wimp, choose not to fight someone out of his league.. or maybe.. chapter 2 will prove it. but not a threesome..

Your writting is good but even a world class wimp is going to some sort of fight and how about some payback for Ken? He fucks up the this guys world, does his wife and walks.Come on. Keep writting.

The interruption of their anniversary date was totally unfathomable. No man even in a wheel chair would not fight to the death over such an insult. It is so over the top that this story lacks any credibility. Now, if this couple had a prior pattern of alternative lifestyle such as swinging or wife sharing then there could be some plausibility to the circumstances. However, the author presented this scene with vanilla sex and a very traditional couple with no apparent mental health issues.

I liked this story up until it turned into a threesome. Then it just felt like a Vivid porno. In the real world, bad marriages and infidelity doesn't end in ménage trois. Just not believable. I have to give this one low ratings.

only a true player turns a situation to were as it is in his/her favor. Violence isn't worth the aggravation at times and this was such an event. Coolness and calculating is a much better way to go......

...just a story but - big as Ken was I would have hauled off and cold cocked him and then kicked his goodies two or three thime.

I would have then walked out and left her there and when they left, would have returned to the bar to think over a drink - Judy would have still been there and probably impressed.

Anyway, good read but just a tad unreal.

for about half of what you wrote. Dump the wife and keep Judy. But to have the both of them, just not realistic. I mean come on, at least try to make the story believable.

trading up to the redhead was the thing to do permanently. simple tell the exwife you cant have sex with her for a year and a half until the test all come back negative.

cornholed mercilessly while smoking a meaty cock, betrayed!

Kind of funny. Out for the anniversary of their first date, she meets an old beau and decides to fuck him. No self respecting husband would allow them to walk out without any repercussions.

So he gets lucky and finds someone and brings her back to his house to play.

Then the wife comes home in the morning after fucking all night and gets pissed with her husband for doing the same thing? I don't get women that have that double standard, that its ok for them to have multiple partners but the husband must remain faithful. But I digress.

Now he's screwing his wife and his mistress then discovers the women are bi and he gets to play with both. Now that's funny. The ultimate male fantasy.

Dream On

HA

This is one that reminds me a little of my wife. She's a schoolteacher who you'd never know likes to screw around. Not always, but here and there she's want to such a teacher after school or once one of the parents of kid in class. I found out about her proclivities by accident, confronted her, and we came up with an agreement. She tells me about what happened while I screw her. It's actually quite hot.

FD45 not everybody enjoys being a cuckold master like you, your stories are just as bad as Matt "the cuckold" Monroe, your another pussy assed writer that talks shit and in the end your hero pussies up and wimps out. The husband in this story is a cuckold pussy, he should have kept fucking Judy and dumped the whore wife.

5 *****'s for you author!! Great story, even if I don't exactly agree with the main character's actions. Still, anything Dmoron marks down, I'm marking up!!! LOL

NO! Here's a couple suitcases that I threw together for you. I'll pack the rest of your stuff and send it to you. Get the fuck out, bitch. <br><br>

The husband had gotten nicely even and it was time to cut his losses with his brain dead wife.

I understand the revenge fuck that took on other proportions. However, Ken needs to be taught a lesson about chasing after married women. I don't care if he is a former lover. That was before the marriage. Now he needs to learn that the past is the past and needs to stay there or he will be back for more. Do a part 2 and take care of Ken.

He likely a wimp as the characters in his stories. Totally a pathetic loser.

First: There are two types of loving wife stories; wimp husband who gets off on it and revenge story. This is neither.

Second: Learn how to capitalize properly. It isn't that hard. If it's in a quotation mark, the first word needs capitalization if it's in the front of a sentence.

Third: Lastly, you tags really suck. When I do a story search, I look for 'cock' or 'adultery' or 'revenge' or 'BBF' Generic tags. You seem to cater to people who want to see Judy's cunt or want to watch Sherry. You will get few hits that way.

Old hide story.

Caused by reading too many wimpy husband stories.

Is he an idiot ? Must be to produce this dog shit !!

Not a total wimp, but still a wimp!

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