All Comments on 'Our Wild Hunt'

A couple of great characters you created!

5

Would love to read about their future adventures. 5*

Man, I had her pegged as a werewolf all the way through.

Another no talent great story.

5stars

Honestly, you had me with the eternally seductive green eyes, red hair, and pale skin triad. And the name ‘Tabitha’ brought to mind Elizabeth Montgomery, my all-time favorite, sexiest witch ever, from the old TV serial ‘Bewitched’. (Tabitha was the character name of her on-screen daughter). A sweet and sexy friends-to-lovers romance, as usual, impeccably written. A delectable treat to accompany my morning coffee. Thanks much.

Nice one. D

Absolutely brilliant. You managed a pretty damn perfect seasonal story.

Wow! That is quite something! A talented look at basic lust and ancient rituals.

As a Witch, and a part-time Goddess, :) I thoroughly enjoyed this romp! Well written as you always do, likeable characters and a love story amongst the celebration. Your stories occasionally contain MCs who 'find each other again" and I love how you portray that coming together again. Well done! 5*

It’s always a great day when a new story of yours pops up on my screen. A lovely set of MCs and enjoyable dialogue, as usual. “Sexy zombie walk of shame” broke me up. Great costume idea.

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If the Lord of Literotica ever enforces a ‘truth in advertising’ policy for our usernames, you will certainly have to change yours. Or at least, punctuate it, maybe like, ‘No, Talent! (Hack…)’.

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Five * from me.

Loved this. Terrific, realistic dialogue. It really felt like I was a fly on the wall watching two old friends catch up and fall back into their playful banter. The predator/prey dynamic was a lot of fun and the closing paragraph redefined that dynamic in a touching way. Five stars all day.

Great story, well written.

Great, as always)

Nice take on the subject. I liked the "solution" with the "sexy zombie" walk. Thank you for posting it.

A little slow to get going and wondering where it was going but alas the realization of true love emerges.

I did like they way they solved their 'dress' problem after their passionate coupling in the park. Very good.

Loved it, NTH! Five and favorited! Great story!!!

Abso-fucking-lutley fabulous!!! The hope and promise really of a wonderful lasting love story delivered in an imaginative way. The Hack strikes again.

Excellent as always. Very special.

As others have said, I truly enjoy your stories. I always look forward to your creativity and the way you develop romances. A perfect Wild Hunt Halloween story! K

Even in a relatively short story, you manage to hit all the marks. You’re one to follow around.

Freaking amazing. Finding the love of your life and claiming them in love with the promise of a lifetime of love. What more could any of us want?

As always, well written, creative, concise, and with a masterful turn of phrase and cultural reference.

Thanks! A favorite for me.

Extremely well written. I thought the "I love you" and "let's keep the baby" felt a little sudden and rushed, if I'm perfectly honest, but stranger things have certainly happened in real life I suppose. As a big fan of mythology, and being very familiar with the wild hunt legend and with the gods and "pagan" traditions you named, I enjoyed that aspect greatly. Still, the sexy zombie walk of shame was my favourite part - very clever! Easy 5/5!

Well written throughout, including the clever zombie ending.

Is there no limit to your creativity? A massively endowed Cernunnos takes his destined mate in a moonlit forest. 5 stars for your tale of a archetypal coupling!

This is a very good and well developed story. For me to get to Five Stars I would have preferred more drama and less sex.

Thanks

Really good! It seems to me more of a Romance than EC, but that's a nit, it was a great story.

Love how you developed both in Past History and current revelation of true but, unheeded feelings. Always love the Happy ending. A little jealous of the Friendship they had for so long and the way it had in abesenture grown into Love.

Usual high standard. And that’s a big complement. Em

Great job, NTH! Very hot, very creative, and I loved how they came together and the explanation for their appearance at the end. In getting to the bottom to comment, I noticed that someone mentioned Tabitha and Bewitched. That was my first thought, too, that the name was a great nod to my favorite witch ever and an excellent Halloween tie-in. Great job and best wishes in the contest.

Simply wonderful

Extremely high standards as ever, nicely done.

Wish I could get my stuff to read as good as yours!

Amazing! A great Wild Hunt! no spoiler, but the "se.zo.wa.of.sh" would deserve a dedicated Contest on Lit

Great job!

I really liked this one! Crazy good.

Five stars as always! Great story wonderfully told.

Very well done - well written! I wasn’t sure at the start but definitely got interesting quickly! Most important I was entertained and enjoyed the dialogue. It got me smiling while reading. 5 stars for sure!!!

A spirited story. Thank you.

Oh heck yea!

hard to understand/appreciate with all the nerdy references