All Comments on 'Out For a Run'

I think that a lot of the info that you put on the start have to do with other stories you wrote but nothing to do with this story. I find most of that info useless and confusing. Onse you start to tell your actuall story though, you really create a nice scene that held me and aroused me to the very end.

Had me wishing I was Ian!!

I would like those pictures...