All Comments on 'Out in the Black Ch. 23'

And I’m so sorry to see it end! I hope you use the characters again, and I’m excited that you have more work coming. Thank you so much for sharing with us!!

Um, I hope your new tale starts soon. ;0)

Such an enjoyable series!! Thank you for sharing with us.

I love this story!! Fantastic writing, amazing character development, hot sex! I look forward to more of your writing and wish you good health.

Thank you for this story! It was full och emotions and love! You really made the story true with all its hesitations from Rustys point of view. And that is what love is all about. Can you really belive the truth of love from someone? Can you dare the risk to go ahead? You really showed with the story all those complications. So once again for Thank you for this story.

One of my fave stories on this site! Hope you're still writing, would love to see what you come up with next...

What I appreciate in your writing is that you pay special attention to speech patterns even when narrating on specific POVs. Rusty "talks" different compared to Mac even in the non-spoken text whenever it is on his POV.

Anon - I'm so glad that comes across! I really tried to inhabit these characters and get a handle on their personal voices. Thank you!

Loooooove this whole story. It is very well written,exciting, thrilling and has a plot which never once dulls the reader. Thank you.

OMG! When I first started reading this, I almost stopped because if the space stuff. But OH MY am I glad I didn't. I laughed and cried so much. I hate that it has ended. You are an awesome writer!