Out in the Black Ch. 23

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"I love you," he murmured against my lips.

"I love you," I replied, pulling back enough to see his face. "Carter Rust, I absolutely cannot wait to be your husband." Rusty smiled and I felt the sun way out here in the black. There were a million things to think of and plans to make, but Rusty convinced me to hold off a bit before getting started. He can be very persuasive when he puts his mind to it.

As he pulled me down onto the bed, I tucked my to-do list away for a time. But it couldn't wait too long: Rusty and I were getting married and it was going to be a hell of a show.


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Bluepoohstar08Bluepoohstar0810 months ago

OMG! When I first started reading this, I almost stopped because if the space stuff. But OH MY am I glad I didn't. I laughed and cried so much. I hate that it has ended. You are an awesome writer!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loooooove this whole story. It is very well written,exciting, thrilling and has a plot which never once dulls the reader. Thank you.

outstandingundergroundoutstandingundergroundabout 2 years agoAuthor

Anon - I'm so glad that comes across! I really tried to inhabit these characters and get a handle on their personal voices. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

What I appreciate in your writing is that you pay special attention to speech patterns even when narrating on specific POVs. Rusty "talks" different compared to Mac even in the non-spoken text whenever it is on his POV.

readerfeederreaderfeederover 2 years ago

One of my fave stories on this site! Hope you're still writing, would love to see what you come up with next...

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