All Comments on 'Out in the Rain'

in the mean time the mother is in London getting tossed by her son

There’s got to be a sequel surely

Dad would have been enough. Adding the brother confused me. Her mom was staying at her bother's, but then her brother Charlie joined her at the end. Does that mean she has two brothers? Or a few minutes later is mom going to join in?

It was fast anf furious, but exciting and I want more! More chapters and more Dad, Dau and son, maybe even more fam?

good up to the blowjob from the son that ruin the entire story

Not even cohesive.

Intensely erotic! Story has a lot of potential and screams for a sequel! I wouldn’t have minded a bit more of background to fleshen out the characters.

I nearly didn’t read it due to the low rating, but I’m glad I did. I’m sure the blowjob from the son is why this story is not rated higher, and it should be. Too many homophobes here, who would have given it 5 stars if it were her older sister sucking off dad.

I would have liked more background on the feelings between them, which lead up to the fucking. Having dad look too long at her breasts poking thru her soaked shirt when she first arrived, as an example.

Keep writing, it’s a good piece.

This whole story was great. Made me rock hard.. wish thete was a follow up

Not believable. Sex developed too quickly, Brother coming in ruined any hope of reality.

Please continue! Some detailed scenes with father and son in the mix would be panty-wetting!

Awesome story, I hope you will write more about Sarah and her family.

Does mom find out? So many more questions, kinky we love it.

Thanks

Annie

Stupid story and some stupid dialogue e.g.

"Oh Daddy keep fucking me with your monster cock, I'm your daughter slut now, you've claimed my hot cunt, now fill me up with your seed." Sarah continued to moan.

or

"When we give you a baby, these beautiful tits of yours will fill with milk, I want to drink from them."

Brother coming in spoilt it for me,

started out ok but the dialogue spoilt it for me, can't believe people say these sort of things in real life and the brother coming in ruined it for me

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