All Comments on 'Out of Deep Time'

I absolutely loved this story, what an erotic fertile mind! 5*s

You have created an engaging story and characters. You added in just the right amount of eroticism and emotion. The plot was cohesive. The editing was excellent. The coloring of the women made it exotic. Most importantly, the characters had depth and were relatable.

Very well done. I look forward to reading your other series.

-S

True science fiction.

This was really good! I love the idea and the world was well created. It was super hot except for all the synonyms for dick. I think you could have just said cock a few more times. Other than that I'm excited to see what else you've got!

It was a great story I rated 5*'s with one complaint , it needed a translation of the words of the Tungs for a better understanding . My Google Translator thought it was Finnish , go figure .

Thanks for the read

txcracker

A well crafted and original story. Would igive it a 7 if they'd add a couple more stars.

Great story about our possible future. I for one would Love to read more of this adventure. Five Stars!

The scifi part reminded me a bit of Egar Rice Burroughs.

Amazingly creative and the payback was worth it. Please, will you not put back up your other story the Druid and the Igniad?

Very good story. Brilliant writing

Really great story! The part where Adam was having sex with both women was just awesome, got this old man's motor revving up. Well worth all five stars.

Hi, I just read both of your stories - you're a fantastic writer! I would very much love to read other stories (as some of the comments allude to), or to wait for you to write more... I just hope that writing isn't something you've given up on. Either way, thank you for the entertainment.

Very imaginative

It's an absolute shame that this ended here. Really fun and imaginative world building and the 3 main characters were so easy to fall in love with. This could have been one of those great Literotica series.

"adiabatic demagnetization" is a new concept in science. So, it's a reduction of a magnetic field but at a constant temperature and no heat flow?