All Comments on 'Out on the Street Pt. 01'

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Laura1234Laura1234over 2 years ago

I wasn’t sure if I was going to like the subject matter. But it was so well done. The closing sentence really makes it more profound, or kind of offered a new insight into the main narrator. It was a bit of a twist for a guy who seems to have the upper hand in all of this

Smith79Smith79over 2 years ago

please give us more

RobJasperRobJasperover 2 years ago

Great descriptions, novel plot line and love the hesitancy of the two young men while they have sex. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Bravo!

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Hi, and thanks for reading my stuff! There's always more coming - or should that be 'cumming'...? I'm working on four separate stories in parallel currently because that's just where my head is at, but they're all coming/cumming along nicely. If you like my style, check out m...

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