All Comments on 'Out on the Street Pt. 03'

Wow that was well done…. So many mixed emotions, missed opportunities. There were lots of hints that Angelo picked up on more than was apparent, and he did really have a strong go at Vitto once, ( I think Frank said something like he didn’t knew he had it in him) which made me wonder in a very glancing way perhaps if there was something there. So powerful… Although I wish vitto could get a job that matched his intelligence - maybe now they can serve for frank who likes to watch… :)

Well done!

I had to read this twice. So intense, such intention. Expected tragedy but turned out it ended in ecstasy. Big "Lit" here. No lack of "erotica" either. I struggled with Frank's voice in the first chapter but missed him here? And that Angelo knew Vitto's favorite position? Favorite line? "I have ears behind my knees..." Bravo!

"I won't run away again. I promise I won't. I won't ever run away again."

Thank you for including this line. After so much pain endured by both of them I really appreciate this, it was desperately needed!

A really nice story, can't wait to see your next work.

great story please more

I am working on a back-story for Frank but it might not be ready for a while. Have too many projects on the go,

gorgeous! beautifully written.

I just realized that "Maybe better...than I knew myself." could meant that Angelo knows Vitto liked him before he knew he liked Vitto.

Wow

reading this was pain and pleasure. STERLING.