All Comments on 'Out the Window Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
fantastic start

very well written and getting quite hot... I was dissappointed when it ended!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Unrelentless teasing!

The story began well till the unrelentless teasing of sex.

Bigjon90974Bigjon90974over 8 years ago
Daddy & Daughter

Nice start...can't wait to read more!

TaljinnTaljinnover 8 years ago

Great start, can't wait to see what you do with it!

KelsweetKelsweetover 6 years ago
Very nice

Great start to a great story (I hope). Cuts off in a weird place though.

anusha_2020anusha_20206 months ago

Nice one. The story is built up in realistic way.

And I like the drink partner teacher, of this courageous daughter!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Worthless.

Bill S.

DevilbobyDevilbobyabout 2 months ago

Mr. Shy what an imagination you have.

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Hello, fellow Literoticans! Veronica here. Thank you for reading my smut! Writing for Lit has been one of the most gratifying hobbies of my life. Nothing quite compares to sharing my dirty fantasies with fellow dirty minds. It's an honor and a privilege. :) Several years ago...

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