All Comments on 'Out the Window Ch. 04'

That was so illicit it made me burn....well, more illicit anyway =) Great move having him off for a business trip, and Katie showing up as an "anonymous sexy bitch"

I love how this story is moving along, and I look forward to following this series to its conclusion. I'm excited to see where this all goes, how it works out and maybe catch more insights into Katie's and Dale's thoughts and emotions.

Love your writing style. I look forward to the continuation!

I've read more than my fair share of erotic fiction, written a good bit of it myself, and I've come to appreciate that nearly every writer has his/her own style. Yours, however, is one of the best that I've had the pleasure of seeing. Consider me a new fan!

Why not inside?

I loved your story very much, it had style and showed a lot of imagination.

Keep up the wonderful work. Thanks

Great series. One thing,in one of the early parts Katie goes to an Ivy League school, then later Purdue.

Horny and laughing at the same time lol

Is it perverted to want more conversation in this genre? Can't help it. One seems to fuel the other.

A slow, solitary applause rises above the shocked and silent masses.... Excellent work M.S!

I am loving this Story. Love the passion.

I'm in awe. What a talent you have! So thankful my Daddy sent these stories my way!

Finally!!! A truly excellent ending is a wonderfull change of pace.

But "Hurriedly she whipped her neck back down the hallway ..."

????? WTF =-(

Beautiful! But a sad story I wonder what the future would hold for them in the real world. Not to forget mum after all she gave Katie life. Not the best way to repay that debt. A five star tale.