All Comments on 'Out the Window Ch. 05'

I'd love to see you get the "two Katies" together, at least, in a threesome! A scene of just them would be even hotter! Of course, they could set him up for a supprise, after getting together. There are so many "places" you can go with this. I hope that you, at least, consider a few of them. Either way, keep writing.

More, please. This is the best writing on this site.

Don't be one of those assholes that don't finish a series. Cause this is definitely not the end.

This is probably the most realistic and living story that I have read. The images flashing before my eyes were so real and so alive that I felt I was living it. I wish that was me in that position with my own daughter. This really fired my imagination. Wonderful!!

By a fag. "1*" .

Haters gonna hate, I suppose.

your writing is superb. hyper-realistic. fleshed out characters. good shit.

Gracias, amigo.

When a guy is laying the pipe hard to one woman. The other females of that mindset instinctively know & start to crowd round like barnyard cats at morning milking time on dairy farm. Well set up by author, vivid descriptions come easily to him without lapsing into parody.

1 * of course.

Nice work buliding tension into the story and setting up for an explosive finish!

The anonymous and mindless detractors should stick to literature of their own level. May I suggest Mills & Boon, or the wonderful world of puerile trash which is about their level of literary comprehension. If you cannot pen constructive critiques, spell titillate correctly and are so ashamed that you cannot even use your own name, please don't assume to; pathetically; comment on the work of an educated and gifted writer.

Now that I have got that off my chest, well done done Mr. Shy, keep writing and exciting your readers, thank you for contributing to our fantasy's.

Please leave every stone unturned in the search for the idiotic commentators. Let them moulder! 😁

Holy fuck Mister Shy.... Holy fuck. Bravo sir.

with Denbi on this. I too am sick of 'anonymous' drooling knuckle-draggers, so caught up in their own acrimonious need to belittle others that it borders on being sociopathic. Maybe it's compensation for their utter lack of creativity or skill at anything.... Or, could just be their complete lack of serviceable genitalia?? Thankfully I'll never have to find out. Great work Mister Shy, I stand in awe.

That I will be REALLY bummed when this story ends. I'm loving it.

and you've certainly made a unique story out of it. Don't see that often on here. Definitely qualifies as "literature". Kind of worried about you turning Katie into a seemingly psycho bitch though....I assume she's just got her daddy's problem and looses her shit when she can't get sexual release? We shall see,

He really needs to see a doctor if it gets so bad he has to bang anything that moves, great erotica but I feel bad for people who actually have this kind of medical condition. Especially since he's trying so hard to suppress it.

WoW! So Hot!