All Comments on 'Outdoor Adventures with Lily Ch. 01'

Great story.

Since this is Chapter 1, I hope that Lily and Vic will have many more outdoor adventures during the summer culminating at the nudist resort before she heads off to university. Please don't include any other participants or knock her up. Simply lots of passionate, unbridled sex between father and his 18 year old daughter.

Awesome story.

Ohhh this was a really nice story. I kinda want to see these two run away together, get a cabin in the woods and start a family

Let your tadpoles do their job. Fill her little fertile, unprotected pussy with your Daddy cum.

That was really good and I think you have set it up for quite a few chapters which I can’t wait to read.

Can’t wait for part 2

Very well written.. picks up gradually. 😊😊

It was alright, until the mom is disrespected and it turns out he's just a cheating asshole and she has no qualms about ruining her mother's relationship with her husband.

Pretty good although this storyline is quite well-worn.

Nicely done short hot story! A good daughter always takes care of her Daddy. Hope we see more of these two!

Yeah, I've read this story, maybe 100 times, and 99 other authors. Basically, a few minor details change, but it's always pretty much the same retread. Yawn.

Very nicely written. Just one detail I found disruptive, if she is so much shorter they cannot be joined and kiss simultaneously. Other than that, great perverted story.

Enjoyable as you put your own individual spin on it. Absolutely looking forward to a few more chapters as their adventures continue over the summer

Love to see how this relationship grows.

Loved it, please continue!!

A hot read....

Love camping sex....

Lily sounded delicious.

4 stars

Nicely told. I especially liked the thick nipples and the hairy bush. Too many shaved stories on lit. I gave it a 5.