All Comments on 'Outside the Squared Circle'

Good story, I think. A bit confused as to what they were training for - they wanted to be professional wrestlers? She was a foot taller than her big brother? Inconvenient for sex, I would think. Still, the story was fairly well written. Thank you.

Nice job. A continuation of this would be great.

I liked it very much. You spent as much care writing the relationship as the sex. It did not feel rushed to me.

It was really disconcerting to me (having at one point trained in "pro wrestling") that you were so far off.

It's very different when the female takes the lead. The story takes on a whole new feel. Well written as always. Great job.

A thousand apologies to my editor in my haste to publish this story I forgot to acknowledge his assistance in the opening. As such I will do it here, my utmost thanks to Jim1855 for taking the time to edit this piece.

Cute story and worth the read. Though as a loooooong time fan of (pro) wrestling I would say that I'd have preferred a little more back & forth between them. Give the illusion that Julia would lose. But either way, loved this story. Wouldn't be against you doing a sequel. Say...a couple years in after they both get in the biz?! IDK, just a thought! L8R!!!

I hope there is another chapter. The great non -sexual build up can flow into a series of adventures.