All Comments on 'Outsourcing'

I've never really been into Anal stories... butt this one was purrfection! I had my ASSumptions made... butt you blew it right out the water!

A+. Will definitely come back for more. :D

If this has been said before, I admit I did not read all 100+ comments. But I doubt there is another author with all scores over 4.5. Thanks.

If Merry wants some strange, though, it will be hard for Tommie to deny her.

This is, in my opinion one of the best stories on lit. Even though itś not that long, it catches you right from the beginning and keeps you focused til the end. I can read it again and again.

Loved it! I'm so ready for some butt action of my own. Yummy!

That was a butt lovers dream!. The whole thing about the young girl next door growing up to be a butt slut is awesome. I could almost see her in my mind and the description of that ass was wonderful.

But this is one fucking great story! And a great fucking story! Keep writing, my friend!

Best. Story. Ever. Seriously,I want to forward this to my wife! Lol. :). ...wonder if she can find a time-share,hmm.... ;)

Nice and simple set up and very satisfying. One of the best on here.

Being an aficionado of sex in the butt, I loved that story! Really liked your writing style too! :)

that the wife will have a very special request for her birthday that the witless hubby may not want to grant.

Now, the Anal Genre is knot to my personal taste {rimshot!} butt this is a delicious story of a clever wife who has correctly pegged her husband's appetites. Fortunate to have a neighbor girl readily willing to 'broaden' her education to a degree in the art of sodomy. When she is prostrate she presents a posterior as lovely as the Moon.

Outsourcing anul sex is the hottest anul story since accidentally misdirected.My brother wrote that story some years back and it got passed around our football club. It was also about some lucky son of a bitches neighbor. She was smokin but not as smokin as the sound of merrideth.

Keep the penitrations going on maybe at a pool party but gay sex can allienate the fan bass.

Piece up in all our arses I say....U agree??

Buy now,Daniels said.

Well done ...great story with great building up the characters ...!!!!!!

...every time I read it. :-D

Fun plot, hot sex, awesome story (in spite of the initial anal directly to oral shift, which normally turns me off).

It was good - the story line was VERY good; but the story lacked passion. On a "hot" scale I would give it a 6.5.

So fucking hot and really well written.

The only improvement I could think is if Dylan's screams of ecstasy bring the wife in, and the wife is mesmerized by the reaming and vows to try it too. :)

sapphic love. Need i say more ?

Fantastic story. I loved the subject and you write very well. Thank you

But I wonder how long it will be before the wife realizes he's always going to want anal now and if she won't give it to him, he'll divorce her and find someone who will?

With a great lady by your side, who loves you more than anything, it works, really!

Really enjoyed the style of writing, skilled author, but after I finished I had a feeling it could have been more. Story line was there, sex was there, but it lacked the right amount/kind of adjectives that get pussies wet and dicks hard.

brilliant plot damn hot, nicely written - thanks :)

Well-written but felt more like a fantasy read. Thanks for writing!

no words to describe how much I love your characters...seriously - thank you!

I keep coming back to this story again

and again. I love it more each time

ME

Everything about the story- the concept, the writing, the imagery were PERFECT!

Please allow me to add my request to the many: PLEASE write about Dylan's next weekend visit! Your first story is/was so good that even the possibilities for the next chapter make me HOT.

I applaud you, Sir. Hands down, this is my favorite story on Literotica, and I find myself coming back to it often. Bravo!

Wonderful read very nice sensuous warm relationship....only if the world was so kind we would not have rich wicked divorce lawyers!

I love your 'spinning a yarn' narrative... the right blend of intense and humorous. I love it as it stands, and... I think two more plot twists are in order: getting Merry and Dylan into a Sapphic relationship, so all three can share pleasure at the same time, and slowly ease Merry into trying, accepting and liking anal. Those two would cork it for me. I already read Words on Skin and loved it. Now I need to check out your other work. I am duly impressed by your writing, Sir. Keep it up! Cheers!

You managed to create a very sexy and vivid image of the young girl casually prancing around the house naked, ready to be buggered by the husband as the wife caries on her business. The length is just right, you didn't get lost in the details, the plot is simple and you build up to some great action that didn't disapoint. Thank you! My new number one!

I will be reading this again and again. Amazing. THANK YOU.

By the end of the story, I was hoping his wife changed her mind and relented to allow hubby to take her anal cherry. Maybe later. Really enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing.

It is one of my favorite stories. I wish that you would revisit it and give us a sequel.

now thats a situation most of us would LOOOOVE to be in talk about a wife willing to do without ,BUT allow hubby to get the anal loving he needs !!!!! wifey ought to rethink her no anal attitude though ??

I don't know where you came up with this one but wives of the world should learn how to make it happen.

I've got one of those 'exit only' wives (the last one was too) and CRAVE some anal lovin'. I wish she'd learn how it's done. But I know a lady or two who might be good stand-ins for her.

Thanks for writing. I too hope there are sequels.

the stuff he's packing up the college kid's poop chute.

But how would it be received if it was the wife that wanted butt fucking and the husband refused. Then he brings in one of the college boys she used to babysit to fuck her ass, once a month. Now, how enjoyable would that story be?

Different theme - just fantastic. Really great story very complete

Nothing less than excellent. Am to read more of your writing. Great build up

to the present. Had me wondering and trying to guess and put it together.

GREAT Tks

awesome, please continue.

I so loved this well crafted tail tale. My partner is a little like Merry but I've never had such an offer before. Looking forward to more excellent writing.

this story makes me wanna start fucking my girlfriend in the booty

5 from me. But it can't stop there. The loving wife has to have some fantasy she would like to try at least once. Hubby needs to find out what it is and give it to her to show how much he loves her as well. After all she expressed her love by giving him such a nice present. Use your imagination, maybe she would like being made air tight once . Or visit a glory hole , where hubby secretly arranged a number of "safe"

cocks, for her to satisfy a fetish of swallowing?

I liked the clean up touch in the bath but he should have commented and shared.

Now his wife has a good reason to fuck around on him and make him a cuckold

I red this story every time I come back to literotica on my bings bc it is great to think that there may be a wife really like that out there.

Like what if they continue the story and dylan wants to marry the guy because he is so good at ass fucking

"It was the first time in my life I was begging for the next commercial."

lmaorotf great job!

Wow...great read.

Cute read but... A wife who provides a hot coed for the husband. Instead of in the Anal Catagory, shouldn't have been under Sci-Fi & Fantasy? 😆

as some of your commenters state. Some excellent writing here. Tingles for all. Very good rag!

I've never been much of an anal man unless it's being done on me. I'M Bisexual. However, You did write a very arousing story. A++. Did I miss it or was there no mention of lube being used? It could be very painful { just my experience).with out lot's of lube.....!

Is there another chapter cumming😉?

I t could be the next time she visits, Merry joins in but only to get licked while they fuck.

I can think of many more chapters.

This excellent story needs a sequel. Please provide it!

Definitely a males' point of view. Loved every word.

What a wife! Wonderful story very funny also

guarantee you she will be getting something of her own from someone else if she hasn't already. Teeny butt bitch just gives her cover if she gets caught. Boring story. Not close to believable. I can always suspend disbelief for the sake of the story but not this time.

I'm not a fan of "guy's POV" butt this was great. A real five star read

The one bad thing about this story is that it doesn't have more chapters. Otherwise it's awesome.

One of my favourite stories. :-)

Such a shame you no longer seem to be writing here.

Tefler

That was SO HOT !!! Could see Mery being drawn to try. Known a few women to go from I`ll NEVER 2 Can't wait. You Raw Paco , Thanks

After Merry 'had' to help in the kitchen, it only makes sense she might have to help later. The solution? Have Dylan in their bed in case of sleepy butt sex and needing Merry's help, all the team are at hand.

5* Loved the story. More Merry involvement would have only enhanced it.

Both gorgeous co-ed and loving spouse are the stuff of incredible fantasy, if only...

Stop keeping us waiting. Write another awesome story already.

Nice story. Loved the way thay thr wife came up with a work around.

An enjoyable story! If women don't want ANAL, OUTSOURCE (especially, if she truly loves you). What's good for the goose, is also GOOD for the gander (sic). Some men don't like SALAD......you get the drift. His turn to OUTSOURCE (especially if he truly loves her.Again, "what's good for the goose, etc., etc., etc. As "hero" said. "KEEP EM Coming". Well written story.

Unquestionably, the best anal story ever written, truly a wonderful erotic love story

That was an incredible story. I only made it halfway before I had to rub one out. Thankfully I came back for the second-half.

I found it on the Top-25 list. I expect it will be higher soon.

It's a rare story that manages to be funny, hot, and loving. The self-effacing MC is hilarious. The coed was smokin'. As to the loving wife, words almost fail me. Is there a planet/alternate dimension where women like this are common? I need to go there.

I still wonder how with all the hours plugged in, he didn't "accidentally" plug that pussy. Merry would forgive him.

When I stumbled onto LitRot about 5 years ago; I just surfed the "similar stories" without looking at categories. I have never been all that interested in anal (and never had it requested); but after this story if a lady were to wiggle dat azz @me and say "pretty please" I might have to reconsider.

Easily top 10 story on LitRot.

Ass, ass, ass.

Needs a sequel. Dylan comes back, merry joins in, 3-way. Maybe even have merry take it in the ass with a stark on from dylan

This has got to be MY FAVORITE story of ALL on his site. I have reread it multiple times and never seem to tire of the fantasy it invokes in me !!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a second chapter !! FOR THE LOVE OF ALL GOOD FANTASIES MAKE A SEQUEL !! Hehe

what a hilarious and amazingly well written story. I laughed at his bewilderment then devoured the story as he plundered his wife's amazing gift. PLEASE PLEASE write again if you have any more of this in your mind.

The only thing I would add to this story relates to my anal fetish. I’d have the neighbor give me a couple 2 quart enemas to clean me up and have the neighbor fuck my ass with a 9”flesh colored realistic looking 9” strapon way up my ass. I’d be happy to have my wife do the same thing next day or two. Big time enema fetish also!!!! Any other enema lover/freaks out there?

Great story, great fantasy!

This is the best 2 page story on literotica. Please write more.

I agree it needs added to so we can see how things over a longer period of time. Would love to see more if you would.

What is the wife doing behind his back to allow this?

And the wife has 7 boy toys on the side.

This needs continuing. Wife joins in? Eats teen pussy while hubby fills teen ass. Wife takes it in the ass from teen while hubby watches. The combinations are endless.

Absolutely incredible, please add more chapters!

Loved the story. If all women were like Merry I think that I would convert to Mormonism and take up polygamy! And thanks for the wonderful description of Dylan's ass. It sounds perfect to me too (reading about "plump bubble butts" etc. in other's stories is a major turnoff - the toned ass of a healthy, active woman is what I find attractive.).

Damn, I really missed out on quite a bit of fun in my teens. I've always been into butt stuff, but back then I didn't know anal sex was a thing some hetero couples do. No internet, see? So I tried to suppress my desires for way too long. Today I'm happily married to a man who loves fucking my ass, but thinking of all those missed opportunities... Anyway, nice story, although I really hoped Merry would join in ;-)

Absolutely terrific story -- yes, more please!

I do so enjoy this story. I think this may be the 3rd time I have read it. Maybe the 4th. Will not be the last I am sure. If there are editorial boo boo's I was so engrossed I missed them! Super hot and well written story.

I am torn about asking for a sequel, but would read it if it appears.

Number and address please!

that was just the best,,hard to believe merry would loan out her hubby for anal duty,,she's a gem...

Wish my wife would find someone for me to have anal with, she absolutely refuses also!

If I could give this a 10 I would! I loved that the wife was so loving that she did this for her Husband and was not insecure about a relationship that would not likely happen.

Absolutely fantastic story, that must be one hell of a drink you had. This just screams of every man's fantasy, it blew more than just my mind. Great details, great story line, and just overall fantastic story! Thanks for sharing!

Wahoo!

Phewwww ! IF ONLY ! I could never believe my or too many other wives could be as giving as Merry. To have a girl grow up next door then end up your anal angel would be so fantastic. Though if her parents still lived next door that could cause some tension. Would love to have this situation because my wife says no way to anal and barely ever tries a blow job. Only once have I fucked her mouth to where I hit the back of her mouth/throat. But this was a great fantasy to feed my mind.

One of my favorites!

shit, I would have fucked her cunt while the wife was sleeping, she would never know, I would like a setup like that, what guy wouldn't,lol.

Totally fantasy material (why can’t this happen IRL?) but who cares? Now I wish I had a tight ass to sink my very hard cock into.

WOW !!!

Yes, this deserved a 10

Only problem now is what does he get his wife for her birthday?

Well, this was one of the best loving stories I have read in a very, very long time. His wife is so caring and thoughtful that he would never even think of cheating on her. WHat a life to live, he gets everything from is sexy wife and gets anal sex from a cute neighbor girl. Could have been put in the LW category but there are too many cheating stories there. One comment that he could fuck her pussy but that was strictly off limits (at least for now).

Excellent...This story needed some pictures or artwork...

If all wives were like Merry.....................

This might be my favorite story I’ve read on the site!!!!! Damn ! Where can I find a “Merry” of my OWN that comes with a Dylan upgrade?!?!?

(10/10/2021) A lovely short story. Really an enjoyable read. Hubby should get on his neese every night and bow to his wifey goddess. Hey, what're they going to do when she graduates?? Find a new coed or does she move in with them??

Well written, great vocabulary, and just enough for a quick and delightful read!