All Comments on 'Over Here'

While there were a few inaccuracies, the tale was a good short read. The erotic parts were done with taste. All in all a good historical novelette.

A long story by Lit standards, but well worth the effort for the pleasure of reading, rather than just to get your rocks off.

As with a 'proper' novel there was a real connection with the characters and interest in their progress.

Not a great deal of sex, but hell there's no shortage of this here on Lit - enjoy it as a good read.

Clearly a labour of love - well done

Few grammatical errors, but a story this long can't be perfect. Beautifully written, very sentimental, brilliant characters that engage the reader well. Loved it, ending slightly rushed though. Could have an epilougue of Katie and Kevin's new life in Kentucky with a grown Anne.

Thank you.

Some historical inaccuracies, but considering its length, and 'lack' of erotic parts, it kept me reading (speaks to talent?).

Well done, and again, thank you.

Dave

PS....good endings are the best.....and you had me wondering.

DGG

Living in canada, many of my parents friends were war brides and so much of their stories rang through your tale. Well written and I look foward to see more of your thoughtful prose.

A wonderful read - It was very entertaining to read this from an English Lady's viewpoint - never mind the comments about accuracy - you did a very good job in the space alloted.

Thanks Again - Just sensual enough so as not to detract from the story.

More please - with best Regard

Ido not care about historical inaccuracies in this excellent story.Iwas so gripped by it ,that when had finished I was momentarily shocked too find it was 2005 and not 1945.It is a story about people and not about war.

Very enjoyable, thanks.

A beautifully written, heartwarming story. I loved it from beginning to end. Thank you for a very good read..

A little rushed in the ending but you got them there. The background of the privation in Britain during the war (and after) was spot on.