All Comments on 'Overbite'

Have you had dental work done recently, Mitchie? Nicely done and 5*, -- JB

The set up was really exciting and hot, the characters were great, but I don't understand why you stopped there and didn't show the sex scene, it was almost frustrating after all the build-up.

Made the story so interesting that she secretly yearned for him since their she saw his erection. Masterfully crafted the got better with each word.

Another FANTASTIC father/ daughter episode.

Loved the way you started the story and built the relationship.

You are the best with developing care between a father and daughter.

I hope you continue the story.

You write the sexiest Father/Daughter stories. Must admit you got me stiff fantasizing about a father/daughter with you.

Hope you will add another episode with the same sexy characters.

is it every male character has to have 'porn star' endowment?

I know Americans think they have everything bigger and better than anyone else, but t'ain't so!!

Very very good. I definitely love how you write your stories😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍. Thank you😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍

Fabulously arousing and erotic as usual, Michelle. Five stars. Wish I could give you ten.

Great story. Very erotic

Great story. Something says to me that the author may be involved in the dental business. The terminology used is pretty good, or really good research . No matter very erotic.......cheers

Before reading this story if someone had asked me if you could make dentistry (the actual act) sexy I would have laughed. You, however, have pulled it off extremely well. A great story that certainly looks at dentistry in a whole new light. Very well done indeed.

Great build up and execution of the character's sexual needs and Dee Dee even fixed his tooth in the process. Looking to read chapter 2.

Thanks for sharing.

RecHiker

Loved it! More please!

You make incest so erotic!!

I have to admit, though, I'll never look at my hygienist the same way again. It's an entirely different relationship, but I've wanted a crack at her for a long time(she's in her late 50's, dark hair and blue eyes which captivate me). I know what I'll be thinking while I'm in the chair at my next cleaning!!

Five for you.

Definitely the first naughty dentist story I've read and girl, you set the bar high. Please for the love of all things sexy and naughty, make a chapter 2 for this one. I'd love to see how the follow up appointment goes. Are all of your characters a figment of your amazing imagination or do you model them after real people? Which ever the answer is, you always do a great job describing them.

@HornyHusband2017 I usually use real people as the basis for my characters. Sometimes it’s people I know, other times it may be a movie/tv star or athlete. I hadn’t planned on continuing this story, but maybe I will. Thanks for the great comments...I love them!!!

Aside from all of the great characters, buildup and oral sex, I laughed at the punch line.