All Comments on 'Overdose Ch. 02'

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Carmilla234Carmilla234over 4 years ago
Really damn good

When's the next chapter?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Much much better

Chapter one was utterly bizarre and frankly non erotic, this one has much more potential. Whilst it has sinister undertones there’s a good amount of plot potential. That said I was surprised that she didn’t jump to the first obvious conclusion, essentially that she’s actually close to death from OD and everything she’s experiencing is just a delusion. That’s the non erotic depressing option.

Thanks for sharing.

Tess (UK)

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