All Comments on 'Overdose Ch. 04'

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Carmilla234Carmilla234over 4 years ago
Excellent!

This is amazing!! I am looking forward to the next installment.

evebroughtanaxthistimeevebroughtanaxthistimeover 4 years ago

He really is a grumpy tinkerbell. I wonder if it's possible for a fluttersmack to fly with a stick up the bum? Midair turning will definately be impaired. She should capitalize on that if she ever gets to chase him with a faerie net. It would be best to take the stick out before sexualy antagonizing him though. Faerie anatomy is still an enigma and it might prove confusing to find an additional stick down there... Okay, will shut up now. I love the story (many little pink hearts and a smiley face) and am excited to read some more.

AspieGirl88AspieGirl88about 4 years ago
Okay, you’ve got me hooked! 🤗

I’m usually very picky when it comes to giving out comments & liking stories, but this particular series has me on the edge of my seat! Please don’t let this chapter be the last, because there won’t be another story like this one for a lifetime! 🥰

Rud1GirlRud1Girlalmost 4 years ago

What a treasure

3 surprise pivot points - superb is this or any other of your works published?

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
She not exactly bright is she!?

She just agreed to give him two unconditional favours/ promises AFTER she pointed out that she knew just how tricky the Fae are, idiot!

Now he can make her promise not to leave.

Love the story

Tess (UK)

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