All Comments on 'Overheard'

I liked it. More please

Nice, hot, short tale!

I wanna read about the follow thru😬

Quite good, really. Chantal's rapid discovery of her need, its glorious satisfaction, and her wanton position on the top of the table, sated and disheveled—all compelling stuff! Very nicely done from her point of view. 5 stars.

I liked this! For a short tale it has a really satisfying feel. As I imagine the young chap's tongue does! Perhaps more could follow? Little snatched moments of secret pleasure between them? In any case, thank you for this :)

You DO know, you're a freak!

Most writers have enormous difficulty coming up with a starting premise. You spit out characters and scenarios like a machine gun, and every one is brilliant.

This is another one that begs for a chapter 2. (3, 4, and maybe 5)

The sex is vivid and real, however two or three fingers torturing that G-spot would be nice as well. You avoid cookie cutter repetition.

I would add those tigers, occasionally.

Superb, thank you.