All Comments on 'Overlooked Bride Ch. 04'

but there are a lot of grammitcal, I assume typographical, errors.

Bianca is going to get Marty in Bed yet. Can she get him to the altar or does she wish to do so at all?

I'm beginning to believe that, in the New Zealand area, sex is like the afternoon tea. Expected. And definitely condoned. And the choice of partner(s) accepted.

The dialogue is intellectually top notch (over my head). Very interesting.

draggy

yawn