All Comments on 'Overly Familiar Ch. 01'

It's rare that a story catches my interest as quickly as yours did, you have mixed sex and humor into an awesome story. I eagerly await chapter 2 and 3 if there is one..

oh yes yes yes!!! please more.

honestly I really love these type of stories but I so rarely

can find them so I really hope for lots more

Right when it gets good it ends! The story is so good I can’t wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work!

In all serious, this was well written. I actually reread this because, I'll admit, the first time I kinda skipped through because I was just looking for the naughty bits. However, once I actually read it, I'm very happy to say that this is written the way I wish more stories were written; the story first, some well written sexual scenes as the icing on top. I want to know what happens to the characters, and I want to know how their relationship grows. Any story that does that, AND has some sizzling sex scenes, has done it right.

Kudos to you, good author, I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

One of the best I have read. Superlative and more please !

I like it.

The gist of the story thus far is kind of like the daydreams guy’s brains churn out nonstop during the awkward phase between puberty and losing their virginity and/or having sex regularly. I don’t think anything on the planet can match how truly horny guys are around that time ... ridiculously horny. Haha.

Back reading this 🙃 just noticed the Alta reference disappointed I never did before

Very interesting story!!!

Most inventive story I’ve read on here… ever. Great build-up, well written dialogue, decent sex scenes which I think will get better, and good characterization. I look forward to reading chapter 2.