by Winterfrog
He certainly eliminated all the squabbles about dividing assets!<P>
Thanks for sharing.
Love your writing but this must not have been much of a marriage, no regreat, no remorse, no bitterness, just next.
He needs to consult his doctor and check the bloodprssure.
This was not a well written story at all, with a rather poor story line. This writer normally do better.
Starts off like 1000 other stories with the man coming home early and finds wife with guy, he goes crazy and marriage gone with no feelings about it after the first day... just done and gone... and wow... he finds beautiful girl immediately and know they should marry on first date... talk about wham bam thank you mam!!!!
The reaction of the wife is what amazed me. She destroys their marraige and then gets angry because he takes it out on the common property. He even exempted the presents that they received from her family from his destructive spree.
Basically that showed that he was completely under control because most people once they lose their head do not make fine distinction. Also he apparently knew her well enough to turn off the bs about, it didn't mean anything, it was only sex.....
Just what should normally be done with one finds a wife is a slut and a whore. I am surprised he left the children with an unfit mother tho.
wanted a divorce. Then she started saying she wanted this and that. I offered to give her half of everything and went and got my chainsaw. She changed her mind and became more calm in stated what she would like to have. She knew I was even willing to give her half of both cars and half a house.
Most off winterfrog's stories are interesting and entertaining , but this one is just stupid and poorly written. Destroying everything in sight and jumping out to propose to new woman.is just unbelievable and stupid. Disappointing from normally good writer
the Ct.Yankee
No wimps allowed in a WF story. Formulaic? Yes. Predictable? Yes. Put a big smile upon my face? Yes!
Good revenge but the story felt hurried and lacked depth. No wimps gets you a hundred, but I had to knock 25 off because it read more like a interview than an actual story. Although I always enjoy and encourage no wimps, and living well as the best revenge, it is important to me for the author to present these themes with as much depth and emotion as possible.
Winterfrog is the 'colder' version of PAPATOAD! Good job. keep writing.
He could have shot them both down in their bed. That would have resulted in a murder rap. Ruining them is better.
Winterfrog usually does much better. This is a very generic cheating story with little to make it stand out.
There was no plot. Nothing happened. A guy catches his wife cheating and divorces her. Does that cover it?
I generally like your stories, but this one didn't make much sense. The last part of the story and the first date was not realistic. That was wishful thinking on his part for everything to work out so fast and live happily ever after.
...your responses with readers who similarly don't speak English? A couple of your correctly worded verses made me think this is just an "assumed" colloquial exposition on your part.This was an "under reaction" if anything,and even the part about "division" of assets is played out in these parts. It's been done many times both vertically and horizontally. It pains me to keep criticizing the vernacular of a dedicated poster who tries to avoid emasculating males, but this particular piece would have been a breeze to edit.
strange sense of reality and morals that he thinks the Husband OVER reacted. No one else does.
I generally love your stories and eagerly await each new posting. Sadly, I was disappointed with your latest offering.
It appears to have been written in haste or was the storyline of an intended much longer work, which was submitted in error. DON'T STOP WRITING THOUGH!
I have read all of your submissions to date - in fact some of them I've re-read several times - and am already looking forward to the next one.
One spelling correction I would suggest to you is that the upper leg parts are called 'THIGHs'and not 'TIGHTS' - which are those hideous nylon things that un-selfrespecting women wear and the designer of which shall forever burn in Hell, if I have my way.
Keep it up.
I wish all readers of my stories a MERRY CHRISTMAS and a HAPPY NEW YEAR.
He was far more civilized than I would have been. He only cut the furniture up. Some husbands would have used the chain saw on her cheating ass!
Nothing very special about this story. And it breaks up a family with children which sets a bad example. So a thumbs down from me.
I am kinda in the middle on this one. A three is what I voted so keep on keepin on. R.T.
its the same in chemistry or emotions. TK U MLJ LV NV
I don't think he overreacted. He saw his wife cheating on him and acted accordingly. Can someone please explain to me the logic of the cheating wife saying "Its not what it looks like. I only love you. It means nothing."
I know what it looks like. It looks like you are fucking someone else beside your husband.
Don't mind my ranting.
HA
May have been a bit over the top for a response but then again only the person experiencing it can say truely how severe the emotional pain is.
Thx
But it's still cheating. Usually when someone cheats they justify it in their own mind to ease their guilt although inside they know they're in the wrong. When the balloon goes up, their only option is to go with their justifications and they are shocked when those reasons are not sufficient.
As far as his reaction, no one can know how a man will react after a shock like that. In essence, a man is probably rocked back to his primal instincts for a brief period of time.
Myself, I wouldn't have reacted in such a way but I couldn't condemn another man for doing so.
perfectly acceptable response. everything of HERS was put away. the bede was destroyed, that ws ok. the kids furniture was left alone, that was ok too. destroying everything else, that was perfect, it showed how the wife actually destroyed the marriage. and it is always what it looks like.
in a civilized manner is how to handle a bad situation, TK U MLJ LV NV
He barely catches her cheating and he's chainsawing furniture? Too funny. But I was a little surprised he just gave his ex custody and the house. That seemed like making things too easy for her. She hardly suffered for her betrayal. The part I like least was that he seemed to move on so quickly to another marriage complete with a kid and another possible kid. THAT seemed a little over the top.
in the aftermath and that's how its supposed to be. TK U MLJ LV NV
Only Scandinavians would think it an overreaction for a man to become angry when he finds his wife fucking a man in his bed. Pathetic pussies.
Liked story overall
Rebound fast but is story wife did not get punished enough
So 3 stars
2* Not much of a story. Wife moves on with no consequences. Our hero should email the bedroom picture to Monica's future boyfriends and future employers. Worst of WF stories.
I agree with BeeBoper99. It is a "blah" story. Disappointing. I am giving it a 3* for effort.
Doesn't believe in consequences for cheating. He thinks a "real man" kicks a lover in the balls and then goes home to his slut wife like nothing happened, even if she was a gangbang queen. In his world, as long as the "bull" gets punched or kicked, then everything else is OK.
A "real man" doesn't need to punch some random guy his whore wife is fucking. They are only getting what the slut is giving away. A "real man" has self respect and divorces a cheating slut. Only low self esteem losers stay with a cheating spouse.
To commenters - and what exactly would you do to the wife? After all there are two kids involved.
Are you living in your basement? Life goes on, pursuing some idiotic revenge against a woman that clearly has no respect for you makes no sense because that way you are only proving how moronic and infatuated you are.
The "real man" kicks ass of the male cheater and once that is done you move one. You do not own the woman and the only thing you can do is to show that you are making a clean break.
A miserable man runs away from a confrontation with a male and tries to punish female even though that female obviously does not care about the wimp. Only in BTB idiotic LW stories a female would beg, cry, and try to get back. In reality such a female has already left the marriage when she started cheating and the only thing a male can do with "revenge" is to show that he is a bigger cuck in his own misery.
When wife found everything in the house cut and the [olice she should have said he had gone insane and was a danger to her and the kids. After what happened she might have been able to have him committed, taken the house all the assets, divorced him as a dangerous man.
To the Wanna-Be Cuckold Timriv.... your comment may make sense to you but the " Story " takes place in Scandinavia where " lesse majesse " takes priority. The Majesty in this case being the Husband as he was wronged by the slut, just a few short decades ago, The husband was well within rights to have The " Adulterers " Stoned to death. Bring back the Righteous Path I Say.
What’s the matter with husbands that take less than a quick glance at the rebound woman and falls completely in love after soo little time?! This is irealistic
Neither one is happy. Husband more pissed than hurt. Makes you wonder why not divorce. Story bounced. Wife;s actions stupid on all levels. Fuck your bosses husband in your own bed. Get caught, get fired and be pissed at your husband. Story got no traction. More like a condensed FLASH story. Recommend you do some character development...