All Comments on 'Owned by a Teenage Goddess'

You have real talent and an excellent imagination. Keep writing in this genre. This is so goooood.

not for the squeamish, and the subject matter perhaps is not everyone's cup of tea, but there is no denying the vividness of your writing. Wow!

Fantastic story. I hope you bring more of your material to this site - one of the best writers of BDSM fiction I've ever come across (pun not intended :) ).

Excellent! Well written and very descriptive. You build the story slowly and deliberatley. More please!

Can't wait to read more of your submissions.

truly the best store i've read in my entire life....wow! Please...please continu this great story.

Truely, a rare piece which can invoke heated emotions without penetration. Enjoyed the internal power struggle ;-)

One of the best sub dom stories I have ever read.

loved the story...the age and size difference made all the difference..!!!

there is a nice story on nifty...seduced by a volleyball goddess...similar and bit more subtle.

I like the way you described the weakness of Nenee towards her Mistress.

It would be great if you continued with the dog treatment of the slave; Hillary would just decide she likes her slave more as a dog then as a woman.

She would forbid her petgirl from speaking (only barking would be allowed) would play fetch with her doggybitch, tell her furniture is off limits to her --yes! in her own home--...

The Mistress would get her conditionned by telling her that if she's an obedient and devoted dog, she will get a taste of Mistress pussy!!

The progression is nice.

I love it.

You should write the next part : the new life with her secretary inside her own house.

Hope you might consider creating more in this genre. They are so invigorating, exciting, and totally absorbing.....

This story is so totally uninspired it's a waste of time to read it!

Every detail is predictable....

Cactus i have read all your stories that i can find , i am sure there is more?

really like the ones from the lair You have this great writing ability to keep the reader

from moving to another story.

if you have other stories that i have not read please send links to eph2240@gmail.com just love your stories. thank you

Not a bad start but then how many dogs have clothes on that should go plus i definitely like to read more if this story! !

I would lick 👅👅 clean her panties 😎

Every new surprised point of owning slave is great. Step by step. I liked details how slave felt more and more in love. Please continue with surprise details how lawyer's life becomes more and more upside down including more and more satisfactions for mistress related to her age and more and more slavery for lawyer.

I wish I was a pay piggy to a beautiful Queen! This story is so good!