All Comments on 'Owning a Maid Harem Ch. 12'

Still 5* but the amount of characters is getting out of hand. If this continues i'll be dropping my score. Most are interchangable because the story is too short to build a good/decent backstory for that amount of "main" characters.

And sometimes these characters come out of nowhere. A little buildup would be nice. Even with the character overview at the start.

Way too many characters to keep track of at this point. I liked the story originally but this one has now crossed the line into 'work to read'. Apply you talents to a new story.

Loving the concept but need more detail of the plot and a lot less repetition of the usage of the “anal sheath” or the “sour taste of Lances cock after anal”

Some points for creativity, I've never seen spicy juices before. This could be a good story if you listen to everyone's advice here. You should add more story, I also skip through to read the couple of paragraphs.

Would be good if he/they stopped stealing happily married women. When that happens, the story plummets.