All Comments on 'Owning Elaine Pt. 03'

by beygaze1

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 8 years ago
Lovely series

And so glad to see it continue. Perhaps life will get better for her now ??

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Delicious.

You write a damn good story. I love what you do to Elaine and how much she loves it. Keep it coming--pun intended.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
I wonder

Can you drown in a tub of vaseline? Dumb.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Nice last page. Many women desire this a lot but are afraid to admit it.

Cindy1001Cindy1001over 8 years ago
Gates to heaven or hell

Indeed, some women crave for this, but you have made the fantasy very vivid and real and thus have opened the gates to what could be heaven or hell (maybe both).

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If you are new to Elaine, the order of the stories is: 1-When Elaine Met Amanda 2-Elaine at the Party (a prequel) 3-Taking Elaine (the traditional start to the story) 4-Elaine in Las Vegas 5-Elaine on the Run 6-Stealing Elaine 7-Owning Elaine 8-The Slaving World (takes place d...

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