All Comments on 'Owning Lin'

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Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Good

Nice build up

ShadowRosie almost 5 years ago

One sided story

She could have said anything, he was so deep into what he thought was going on. That is an almost dangerous situation. He was so deep he would not have responded to her safeword. I'm not really sure that qualifies as BDSM. BDSM is more light-hearted and not as deep in most cases.

Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

Thanks for this story

Excellent writing and great emotional detail. Beautiful use of language.

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