All Comments on 'Packing in Tight Places Ch. 02'

Yesno mistake only 3 stars.

Hi, 63lsmith: Was it the writing that disappointed you or the content of the story? I appreciate your honest feedback.

Another chapter, please.

Please can you write the next chapter as soon as possible I love it!

Hmm....I am confused. I read storys about BBC in a similar vein, and while they aren't my "cup of tea", they usually produce an extremely stiff erection and, more often than not, an explosive orgasm. No different here, but Tyrone was not identified as having a BBC yet the description of his behavior was indicitive of the usual big, black guy, taking a weaker sissy, using him for his pleasure and often times taking the guys wife, too. Is Tyrone a black guy? The name seems to indicate so. If not, perhaps subtly introduce that aspect to your sequel, nothing quite as exciting as the description of a Big, Black Cock, oozing sweet cream, as big around as your forearm, pink head pulsing with pleasure, waiting to be sucked dry by a submissive sissy!