All Comments on 'Page Ch. 02'

Ithink this is an awesome story and it must continue for at least 5 or 6 more chapters I would give this 10 stars if possible please continue it....

Both of these chapters have been much too short. The level of detail is just about right, but it leaves me unfulfilled, or perhaps leaves me wanting more is more accurate. Love the characters and enjoyed the shopping trip to Kohls (really did). Glad you didn't do the dressing room thing. Curious to read what these mysterious secrets of her's are all about. Good job. 5.

This story is turning into some crazy Ludlum-level stuff but with added sex an incrst to spice it all up. 5* and hopefully more chapters to come soon!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Yes please continue.

You have me trapped , you must continue the story. 5 stars. Thanks

It's looking now like there is much more to it and certainly much more to Page than Chapter 1left us expecting. Great work. Hope the wait times for coming chapterS are brief. Five stars.

Looking forward to the next chapter

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God damn... The cliff hangers... Why at that point? :c

Keeping me guessing and entertained. Looking forward to the next chapters.

Well written and presented. Keep it going,

I can't wait for the next installment!!

What can I can say that hasn't already been posted..It's a wonderfully erotic story..I would agree it definitely left me wanting MORE :-)

It's very refreshing to read a new story that you can't guess easily what the story line is going to be. I hope you are already working on others chapters of this story.

You are a amazing writer! I hope you make this into a long series.

This story you have written has such a cool start! Please continue this one until you finish it. Obviously the sex is really hot, but the storyline is way above that. Keep going.

Loving this, no negative to it

Page is playing WoW! I've been in that instance as a healer. Hope that isn't a spoiler for anyone. I really want to know where this is going. Can we have the next chapter soon, please?

I knew you had it in You! *****+

Hurry up with next chapter.....

As with sex, so too is writting; these things are better unrushed.

Can't wait for the next chapter now that I'm setting on pins & needles waiting. Thanks

I don't know where this is going, but I'm enjoying the ride so far! Hopefully it will continue and not leave us hanging somewhere! :)

Write on!!

I could see dribbling out the chapters as they are written. But since these are rewrites, why not combine 2 or 3 of them as a single submission?

We aren't sure where rightbank's comment is headed, but this story has never been posted before and is the solely our creation We have been taking a break over the holidays and will be posting Ch. 4 shortly. The first three chapters were not dribbled out, they were published within a month's time.

I hadn't seen this story until yesterday when I noticed that Chapter 5 had been posted so I started at the beginning. Your usual standard of excellence is right on track.

but it seems to have gotten more of a direction and I was amazed that you seem to take some suggestions. I'm not sure I would. I'll keep going and see where you take me.. hopefully gullible Scotty

I’m hooked!

Next!

So after another night of maybe dreaming?; maybe not (?) he walks out to the kitchen in the nude and his sister is cooking breakfast also in the nude. Hmmm. I will see how #3 goes. Still not going to rate at this time.

5 Stars

wow...

im so into this....hope it doesn't disappoint

love it

My second read through, and it is just as good as the first time, I really hope you will write a finish to this story, it’s to good to not have one, its also one of my favourite here on Lit.

Reading again because more chapters are coming and l cannot wait

Still a healthy 5/5

Damn I'm hooked in now great story

Just love the cloak and dagger. Well done 5/5

Well this is fun!

Don't mind the "spy" drama but the emotional drama the sister is putting this guy through is not enjoyable to read, imo.

Much better than the first chapter. And now your previous comments about spy movies is starting to make a hell of a lot more sense. Page was "recruited" while she was working as a page in Congress. She's probably got a genius level IQ and is protecting Ryan. I still don't like her new persona so I'm still not going to rate this higher than 4/5.

Ahhh, more mystery. I can deal with that. A very good continuance. Romantic and loving. 5🌟

What has Page gotten into? No drama I hope... good pussy will do that to you.

This is just me, my opinion, but her being that experienced at that age… ugh. And the ‘jewelry’…