All Comments on 'Paige and Quinn'

by BJB69

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TheRiseFromAshesTheRiseFromAshesover 2 years ago

The story was quite nice for a buildup, but the action was really rushed - and not really the central part of the story. I hope you continue this story and develop it even more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

to many unnecessary details

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