All Comments on 'Paige Ch. 01'

It seemed a little...contrived? It lost me about half way through. But the mentor idea was good.

I've been waiting so long for chapter 2. Please don't leave us hanging. This one has some great possibilities.

Well? Where is the next chapter then? That was hot and there most definitely needs to be more.

Beautifully realized! WHere is part 2!!!!!???? Please, please . . . can't wait!

Love the way you started out, building on a very familiar scene to most of us. Can't wait to see it unfold.

My Fuctress hath written a great story. I can't wait for chapter 2 and the sleep over. Keep it up.

Great work Dani! Looking forward to chapter 2 already! Keep up the great work :)

Chapter I is a great read Dani. It was easy to visualize it as I read along and I am eager to read Chapter II. So get with it already! ;)

...and i am curious what will happen next.

Omg, hurry with the next chapter! This was amazing!

I agree with every thing druce19 said. Thank you for sharing your story and please hurry with the next chapter!!!

Dani:

Your writing is very, very good !! You allow the reader to visualize what you're writing about and let them take that next step mentally before you continue. Your style is very erotic without being in-your-face brash and the flow of your story is incredible. I can't wait to see where Chapter 2 leads ! :)

Thank you all for the kind words and the encouragement. I am working on Chapter II, so it won't be too much longer before it's up.

Ok, ok, please keep going! Seduction is sooooooooo wonderful

A very nice starting build up to a sweet love story that I feel might get pretty steamy in the next chapter. Looking forward to more.

Thanks for a great story. I (and many others) can't wait to read more. Looks like the AP English class payed off in more ways than one.

Can't wait to hear more. Very sensual story, wish I knew how much fun girls were when I was in high school!

Keep writing please!

can't wait to read more

Don't keep us waiting too long.

One of the best written, most erotic, most exciting stories I have read. Now, continue. PLEASE.

dont you dare stop the story here ,you must keep the story going

please keep it going