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Click hereShe feels Him always. Acutely senses His presence in the universe. Knows Him by waves in the fabric of her life. When His hand is not curled around her boob, or separating her fingers with his own. When He is not ramming His gorgeous cock into her, she aches. As deep as the bruising she feels near her heart.
Somewhere in the night, He took her down, lifted her to bed and fucked her. Hard and long and deep. Took every last bit of anything left to her. Pounded in her. Past her throbbing need. Through her desperation. Beyond her pleas for mercy. He fucked her into the nether world she sighs in now. And she melts deeper.
- COMMENTS
BelleCanzutoover 4 years agoI've been looking and looking for a good story with an intense whipping in it. I thought this was very well done. The description of the action as well as her mindset, and their interaction.
So many readersa and commenters here seem to think that BDSM should be all about the D/s and never about the S&M. But it's the S&M that interests me. I've added this story and you as an author to my favorites list, and am looking forward to reading more of your work. Thank you.
arbenitreover 5 years agoAuthorI assure you all that she loved every moment. I do take time and tremendous effort to know a submissive and exactly what she needs and wants. Harsh? Yes, I thought so when the scenario was first designed. She is masochistic, but more than that, pleasure was so overlaid that pain is only an amplification and vice versa. The end result is a surrender so complete that it wouldn't be unreasonable to think our souls must have comingled at some point. An intense and abiding memory for us both.
Anonymousover 5 years agoThis is an intense scene. I'm not into the S & M part enough to have enjoyed it, but it's good. It's a good combination of how focused and disjointed the brain can be at same time. The consent is there, but I'm a bit concerned she would still be able to safeword. It would be interesting to read the same scene from his pov.
Innocent_freakover 5 years agoI disagree with what was said above. Not all harsh Doms are assholes. I do however disagree with leaving anyone in bondage alone, for any amount of time. However, this story struck me as one of getting deeply into the mindset of a submissive. From personal experience, there are times that your Dom challenges you because they know you are withholding something, this struck me as her finally being able to let go, of all her apprehensions, it was forced out of her, but maybe that's what she needed to get there and he knows that. How often in this lifestyle do we point the finger at Doms and accuse them of victimizing their subs? People too easily forget that it's the responsibility of the submissive to know and use their safeword if they need to. A sub can be dangerous if she cannot do so, which hurts both her and her Dom. I can definitely relate to a lot of the emotions that are expressed here, this is so well written and eloquent, just the immense vocabulary even. It was a beautiful weaving of a mind, and I loved it.
Anonymousover 5 years agoYou sure gave him all the lessons. Hope it was fun. She's probably dead now.
