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Ravey19Ravey192 months ago

I wondered about the cow that never calved feeding others but a minor point in an excellent piece.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great!!

I'm really enjoying this story and I think its great that you update so regularly. Thank you. I kinda wish the chapters were longer, all these short chapters make the story seem choppy. Otherwise this is one of my favorites. Can't wait to read more!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

Loved the chapter. My only complaint would be about the cow. If the cow isn't able to produce a calf, and therefore calve, she can't produce milk.

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I'm a 37 year old woman. I've been writing since I was big enough to hold a pencil. All kinds of works. Anywhere from fantasy and history, to modern, to the most erotic fantasy scene I get in my head. My writing comes from a delightful mix of personal experiences that are very...

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