All Comments on 'Pam & Her Neighbours Son'

What is it with so many adolecent writers? As soon as the charachter is on to a good thing he wants to involve a budy. Grow up. This does not happen in the real world. Spoiled an otherwise good story.

Writer should check and correct the spelling before posting. Even the word COLLEGE is misspelled repeatedly.

Writer needs to read through the story, correcting spelling mistakes and adding

punctuation where necessary. I don’t think that there was a comma anywhere in

this piece.

Good read a real back in the day find. I hope you are still writing. Thanks for sharing.