All Comments on 'Pam Mitchell was Asleep'

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 4 years ago
"sometimes you just wanted to play with them..."

My mother eventually admitted she enjoyed me doing that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Good story!!Please continue the storyline don’t stop, take us up to his boot camp and his coming back home. We know she loves her ass played way and being fingered

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Good beginning

Like the story but you should of let the son go down on the doctor to show her what he had learned. Well that's my 2 cents.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More to cum

Great start! Robbie needs to be alone with his mom in bed. Then they can fuck in several different positions, with Robbie paying a lot of attention to Pam's tits. The doctor can wait for now until she wants Robbie's cock too. Five Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Hot story, missing a few details

Hi, This is a nicely hot story, but a few details to add continuity might enhance it more. At Chapter 3, first paragraph, we have the doctor telling Pam to bring in her son. Nothing gives a hint to lead to this, which would tell me Pam has told her about the events in bed prior and her own interest in going further with him. Subsequently there seem to be other gaps where the story abruptly jumps to conclude a scene and I'd simply offer that you might read it over, fill in, and elaborate with each scene, as it's all quite hot and a lot more can round it out. I think it's really hot and appealing, so have at it!

ROCKY70ROCKY70about 4 years ago
A good start. ^*!^*!^*!

I just hope there will be more to cummm.

Not a bad read,well done.

..THANKS..

USAF

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 3 years ago

Totally fucked up story.

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