All Comments on 'Pam - The Thrill of Getting Caught Ch. 04'

Absolutely hot story. My only grip is you named the performing couple but not the couple that joined you is a bit inconsistent. All in all the way you captured both scenes and atmosphere is top notch.

I've been too several sex clubs and all too often the visitors just walk around expecting others to do stuff. Too many voyeurs and not enough action. Having a single couple perform with dozens of voyeurs is very common. I'm curious to know how many people Googled this club in SF after they read your story. Great story by the way.

Pros

You made the scenes easy to visualize.

Fun story with non stop sexual atmosphere.

Enjoyed the squirting performance the most.

I want more of this.

Cons

Not enough build up.

More character development.

Some writing flaws but hot sequences. What the heck 5/5.

Would be hotter if u 2 got to bang the exotic woman also. Still a excellent theme and sexy story.

Good stuff not great. Episode 1 was better. Still enjoyed it though.

fun times

- Series is very cheeky and positively peng.

- Looks like there is no more, last chapter?

Liam UK

I wish you would have continued writing about the rest of the night. Feels sort of incomplete. Steamy read though.