All Comments on 'Pamela's Plan Ch. 01'

Can't wait to add Pamela's girlfriend!!

Is there chapter two, and three? You have a good story here, please continue. I loved the interplay between Pam's supposed seduction of her brother, and his knowing manipulation of her seduction.

good story butwhat happened to billys plan to include his sisters friend you just forgot all about it you said he was going to insist that she join them what happened

This is such a good hearted story you should just marry them off together and LET THEM share a happy life amen!!!!!!

The Story was great and I liked that the sister was the aggressor. The slow build-up was a hit! I like it, when the story develoopes slowly and the reader gets to know every little detail how the characters feel. The thing that he gets to know what she's trying on him is very great, too. I'd just like to know how the sisters friend felt like, when she got to know, that her best friend has a crush on to her own brother. Isn't the usual way things go :-) But still a very great story and I'd love to read many more chapters of this one. Keep it as romantic as this one *g*

BAR 1-2 spelling mistakes, missplaced words it was the perfect story, IM CALLING YOU IDIOTS AS he didn't get the sisters friend involved for a reason - the teasing got so out of hand and made him so horny as it did her he simply forgot about her friend AND WHAT GUY WOULD REMEMBER A RANDOM GIRL when you have a more beautiful sexy tease of a sister trying to seduce you, and again for the IDIOTS HERE i bet when he was getting seduced by her, or so she thought i bet he was thinking all along whilst his sisters beautiful body had him hypnotized he was thinking, hmmm i could really do with you bringing your friend over???? F**KING HELL SOME PEOPLE ARE STUPID, you'd not even think of the sisters friend if it was you, you'd just wanna fuck the the sister and thats it, like the ending said they felt true love for each other so adding a friend is only going to complicate things and fuck it all up, IDIOTS!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's these type of people, they have a hot story to imagine and work with and they complain about the lack of a sisters friend hahaha what a jackass

so bad get an editor and do a rewrite way to many wrong words missing words and miss spelled words really makes it hard to enjoy never ever post a story without going through a good editor first

This was a good story ruined by too many errors. If you had taken the time to read through it these errors would have been obvious. If you don't wish to use an editor then print it off and read it out loud, that will soon iron out the mistakes.

were exactly did it backfire? yea he found out about her plan but he didnt turn the tables on her, he still did exactly what she planned on him doing. i was expecting him to let her know he knew about her plans or turn down her teasing or something, but nothing.

if all she did was tease him he would go out of his way to avoid and ignore her at all costs. YOU DON'T LOVE AND FUCK SOMEONE THAT IS A TEASE YOU MAY HATE THEM BUT NOT LOVE KEEP IT ATLEAST SOMEWHAT REALISITC AND BELIEVABLE PLEASE.

More!!! These two must stay together forever now!!! Please make their love everlasting!!!